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| "Interactive Story" Reviews/Comments [ 59 ] | | Pages (4): [ « < 1 2 3 4 > » ] | Reviewed By: Windwaker On: May 03, 2003 20:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so stupid. I forgot something.
Role models: J.Lo, Mai, and my Language Arts teacher.
Things I don't want you to put in: That I have "Strong emotional feelings" towards Mai. I do, but not the "Strong emotional ones."
Thank you: Thank you.
P.S.:Make me Mai's friend!
Thank you again: Thank you again. | Reviewed By: Windwaker On: May 03, 2003 17:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry, I forgot something!
Personaltly: Someone that likes to have fun. My zodiac sign is Libra. Look up Libra and find my personaltly. It's all true, I read it.
Thank you: Thank you.
P.S.: I will be your slave if you just let Mai be my friend in the story! I really would to, if I just know who you are.
Thank you again: Thank you again. | Reviewed By: Windwaker On: May 03, 2003 17:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Name: Jasmine a.k.a. Jazz
Age: 10
Gender: Female
Some cards in deck: Buster Blader, Scapegoat, Confiscation, Change of Heart, Monster Reborn.
Enemies: Taylor C. in real life, Tea and Tristan in the show.
Hair: Long, ebony hair. Bits of brown.
Eyes: Brown
Skin: Tan
Ranks: Beginner
Personalty: Nice, genorous, smart (hopefully).
Apperances: Don't care what I wear. Usually jogging suits. And I got the cutest smile ever!
Favorite card: Harpie Lady, anything that realtes to Mai, and Dark Magician Girl.
Favorite person on show: Mai!
Least favorite person on show: Grandpa (though he's not my enemy), Tea (God, I hate her), and Tristan.
Who I'll like to hang out with: Mai.
Who I'll like to go out with: No one. I prefer solo when it comes to boyfriends.
Why I like Mai so much: Independant. I want her to teach me how to be that independant.
Extra details: Please, please, please make me a friend of Mai!
Thank you: Thank you.
P.S.: Look at Extra details, and get that straight in your head. | Reviewed By: Suzanne On: April 28, 2003 12:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Name:Suzanne Tol
Age:21
Gender:Female
Some cards in deck:Change of hearts,Black Magician Girl,Harpie"s
Enemies:anzu
Hair:Fine dark brown
Eyes:light blue
Skin:white
Ranks:The netherlands National Champion
Personality:Smart,lonner,caring,Likes going to the movic's,computer,Good white kid's(1 sister,2
brothers)I hide my feelings well,not to the one's I care for!
Extra:I like to date Kaiba/or by his girlfriend.
Becouse I dust love hime^-^.
I-mail me please?!At suzannetol255@hotmail.com
Bye Bye | Reviewed By: MaujinVader [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2003 15:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
can you please put me in the story. your fic sounds so cool! if you put me in this fic i will tell everyone i know about your fic. and i know alot! of people. but please i beg of you. ive never used xanatos. and i really want him to fall for tea! i know it sounds weird but he needs to stop being so mean! thanks please put him in! | Reviewed By: MaujinVader [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2003 15:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
sorry about that
extra details: wants to go out with someone who will teach him to be a good friend. is tea available? | Reviewed By: MaujinVader [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2003 15:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
Name: Xanatos (Zanatose)
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Some Cards In Deck: rageki, mikazuikinoyaiba, red eyes black dragonx3, jinzo, buster blader, beast of talwar, summoned skull, serpent night dragon, lord of d.x3, flute of summoning dragonx3, goblin attack forcex3, monster reborn, and mirror force
enemies: Espa Roba. Rex Raptor is a rival
hair: black, down to neck
eyes: black
skin: white
rank: ranked 2nd in world championships against kaiba
personality: quiet, mean, keeps to himself, lonely | Reviewed By: MaujinVader [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2003 15:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
Name: Xanatos (Zanatose)
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Some Cards In Deck: rageki, mikazuikinoyaiba, red eyes black dragonx3, jinzo, buster blader, beast of talwar, summoned skull, serpent night dragon, lord of d.x3, flute of summoning dragonx3, goblin attack forcex3, monster reborn, and mirror force
enemies: Espa Roba. Rex Raptor is a rival
hair: black, down to neck
eyes: black
skin: white
rank: ranked 2nd in world championships against kaiba
personality: quiet, mean, keeps to himself, lonely | Reviewed By: SAJ On: April 16, 2003 21:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
Um. . .I sort of write novels, children's stories, young adults, and teens, and my favorite character to write about is Amanda Trailheart.
She's fourteen with long, wavy, red hair that flows down to her waist, and bright purple eyes.
Her personality is a bit hard to explain. . .um. . .she always says what's on her mind, (whether it's for the best or not), is constantly getting herself into trouble, acts before she thinks, is a bit weird, (not afraid to try new and different things)and overall, is a nice, caring person who is very mischievous and fun.
I'd say she'd have (what's in my deck), at least two Summoned Skull, Shadow of Eyes, Malevolent Nuzzler, amd Shift.
She would be awfully terrible (sorry, double negative) at dueling, (you know, accidently destroys her own creatures, puts monster cards in the places reserved for magic and trap, etc.) But she never gives up trying to improve.
I'd appreciate it if you'd pick her. She's a blast to include in stories and I'd be honored if you'd choose to have her in yours. | Reviewed By: Millenia [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2003 16:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
P.S
adding to my persona and all.
ANY BODIES ENEMIES CAN BE MINE TO KICK THEIR BUTTS> *gasps* Better dancer than Tea and if its possible I want to be some kind of recarnation from a character's past. (ex. Joey's Seto's or Yami's) | Reviewed By: Pooka228 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2003 18:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Name: Pooka
Age: 13
Gender: female
Cards: Dark Magician Girl, Mystical Elf, Dark Magician, Magician of Faith
Enemies: none
Appearance: Small. Long blonde hair. Green/Blue/Grey eyes. White Skin
Ranks: none
Personality: Kind, caring, weird
Extras: I like Yugi! | Reviewed By: Millenia [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2003 15:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
Okay heres meeeee!
Name:Millenia (Mel)Candy
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Some cards: Change of heart, Flame swordsman, Dark Magicain of Choas and Red-eyes black dragon.
No enemies
Looks:Tall, skinny, long/thick blond/brown hair, big brown eyes, and has tan skin.
Ranks: Novice
Personality: Hip, loves to dance, has an accent (yes Joey's or Bakura's don't care which). Kicks a$$ when others are in trouble or angry. (Quick temper could explain that) Smart, kind, loving and a comedian.
Extra: I would like to make friends and maybe go out with someone. ^^ | Reviewed By: Jasmine On: April 15, 2003 15:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
I am so stupied(-_- you konw)I put the wrong Email(O.O)Sorry it's Jasmine_749@hotmail.com
I am so sorry about that. Oh I just want you to know that if the date goes well then I will give Yugi my BEWD. Sorry about everything. | Reviewed By: Mailin On: April 15, 2003 06:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Name: Sapphrine
Age:15
Gender: female
Some cards in deck:Dark witch ATK1800/DEF1700, Seiyaryu 2500/2300, Darkfire Dragon 1500/1250, Doma the Angel of Silence 1600/1400, Thunder Dragon 1600/1500, Hyozanryu 2100/2800, and Graverobber
Any enemies or rivals: Tea. Never did like the girl. I mean I'm not against the whole friendship thing, but she talks too much.
Appearance: Long and straight sky hair and the bottom portion is blue, crimson eyes. wears something similar to Mai's but blue and white, no boots but blue heels. two silver bracelets on the right and two silver bracelet on her left ankle.
Ranks: an ok duelist
Personality: nice, friendly, can act mean in a playful way when insulted but doesn't take it seriously, shy with new ppl.
Extra details: Ryou's cousin. gets hyper after eating chocolate. Oh, and if Malik's in your story, can you pair me with him. Malik, not his dark side. Thanks a bunch.
If you need anything else, you can e-mail me at: v_angels_63@hotmail.com
If it's all right, can you do me a little favor? can you e-mail me when you post up the chapter. thanks a bunch. | Reviewed By: Ice Phoenix On: April 15, 2003 06:19 CDT
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Sorry, forget something. The armband is at the left arm. *Laugh nervously* Ja! | | Pages (4): [ « < 1 2 3 4 > » ] |
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