| "Cloud Watching" Reviews/Comments [ 28 ] |
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Reviewed By: Usagitsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 09:55 CDT
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Poor litt'l Inu yasha!
He's heartbroken!;___;
But I hope he'll eventually recover!!^.^
Go on! |
Reviewed By: carmela On: August 01, 2003 02:47 CDT
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I'm so glad yo uupdated!! Your story is going great and I can't wait to finish it! Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: pruningshears [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 02:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the best story ever!!!! and you really did very well with the kikyo situation, you cahracterized everyone so well. I am amazed! great job!! And i will admit i feel sorry for her, and i also say that it was a wonderful touch to have the real kikyo say good bye, because that shell of hate wasn't really her and we all know it! It was the perfect ending and i cant wait to read about sango and miroku's wedding!! so hurry and post!!! |
Reviewed By: misty On: July 17, 2003 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write more sure that the only time i felt sorry for the dead miko |
Reviewed By: LonelyAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2003 14:32 CDT
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It absolutely fabulous!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I love it! And I admit it I did feel a bit bad for Kikyo. |
Reviewed By: Brittany On: July 12, 2003 13:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The whole fic. was excelent. U really put together a enthusiastic story. Please add more. I will keep reading. |
Reviewed By: Usagitsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2003 09:53 CDT
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Oww!!Come on...Don't let Inuyasha fail !What about Kagome? it wouldn't be fair to make her die!!
Go on , please! |
Reviewed By: PunkRockGirl On: July 08, 2003 13:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Very Very Very Good. It's a nice change to have something more romantic, less lemony! |
Reviewed By: Usagitsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2003 13:09 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue!!!!!^-^ |
Reviewed By: Usagitsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2003 16:08 CDT
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Oh my!!(wow! another bad cliffhanger!!)
Kagomeeee... ;-;
Inuyasha HAVE to save her and bring her soul back !!How can Kikyou do such a thing!!?Kagome is nonetheless her REINCARNATION!!(therefore hurting her future should hurt her too ,shouldn't it??)
Do something!!!Please write more!!^__^ |
Reviewed By: Usagitsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2003 13:03 CDT
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Always sooo cute!!
It's still going great!!^_______^ |
Reviewed By: Precious On: June 28, 2003 14:40 CDT
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Frankly I am a romantic at heart, so I really like your story. It is so sweet and endearing, and the scence that had Kagome on her death bed had me close to tears. And I know you said Rin and Sess were going to show up but what about Kikiyo? ( you know I always thought that her and Kagome were related, ohh the similarities: where they live, appearance, miko powers, InuYasha... ) Will the gang have to leave their new home for more adventgers? Does the jewel end up back in Kagome's body? So many questions, not enough time! I'll be awaiting your next update.
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Reviewed By: Inu Fan On: June 27, 2003 22:36 CDT
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I loved it. It was a nice change from some of the other stories. So many lemons I like the nice sweet story. Keep on writing I'll be waiting for the update. Till then I don't know what I'm going to do I'm just going to get bored. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Usagitsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2003 06:32 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
True!!Come on everybody, write!!!It's really worth doing it ,ya know!
Sweetie little story!I really appreciated the reading!!Too bad it's soooo short!!!
If you have some spare time,please try to continue it!!
And do Kagome changed her physical appearance as her senses?(shouldn't it be logical that she would look like a hanyou too , if she had changed her senses??Cute little ears like Inuyasha would really suit her I think!^__^)
See ya!
Ps:Will be expecting a next chapter!! |
Reviewed By: shadypony On: April 18, 2003 09:51 CDT
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Woohoo you wrote more. This story is so sweet. I think you are a realy good writer and that you deserve lots of reviews *shakes fist at the people that have read the story but are to lazy to review*
SHADY |
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