| "The City by the Bay" Reviews/Comments [ 56 ] |
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Reviewed By: lil_sesshi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2003 13:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good story hope you can update soon.
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Title: really really good
Reviewed By: arch_angel On: October 29, 2003 00:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really great sess/kag fics.......come on plz...update soon...plz..I love ur fic...
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Reviewed By: fluffy'slova4life [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2003 22:13 CDT
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what in devils name is takin you so freakin long?!
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Reviewed By: rAiNwAtEr On: August 03, 2003 01:08 CDT
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starts singing ..I want candy....I want candy...opps you didn't read that. Anyway I want more chapters......I am going to go crazy..onegai update sOoN..arigatou.. Ja ne for now but I'LL.....BE.....WATCHING.....YOU... hahahaha just playing like I could see you... Well Ja ne =p have fun writing
live good......read well......write great =p |
Reviewed By: fluffy'slova4life [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 15:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep updateing! |
Reviewed By: crazyblade On: July 29, 2003 12:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was a vey creative fic, also the best Sess/Kag I've read in a long time! Keep writing! |
Reviewed By: Jackie On: July 26, 2003 02:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sess should hav a cadilac escalade *drools they're soo nice i hope thats how u spell cadilac ecalade oh well just try and sound it out please update fast this is a really good fic i likes it alot |
Reviewed By: jschu25 On: July 25, 2003 20:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi
I really enjoy reading your stories. This is just too funny. It took me like 6 hours before it dawned on me who Jak & Sui were, I already knew who Ban was. I was wondering if you were going to do a pairing w/ Kikyou & Sui. After seeing the last couple episodes of Inuyasha, I think they could of made a pair if they both weren't dead and Kikyou so full of hate. I also wanted to thank you for show me this site. I will be back for more. Jschu25 |
Reviewed By: mandi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2003 05:41 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fic, it's pretty good. Though I must say that I was kinda hesitant at first being The City and all...but you done a good job mixing each character with respectable amounts of "Frisco-ness" ^_~ (I should know..hehe) Well I can't wait for more work from you, until then, I'll be waiting.~mandi |
Reviewed By: Dark Song [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2003 00:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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i really liked this chapter. it was mostly the email exchanged that i loved. i can wait to seehow things will become with the two of them living together basically. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Hooded person On: July 02, 2003 22:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice, keep it up... Or I will have your head. *Licks my claws while looking at you* |
Reviewed By: sesshou's_baby's_moma On: July 02, 2003 14:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! that chp.4 was the best! i thought that i read ur almost best wehn i read "a demon should act like a demon" but when i read "city by the bay" it was even better(if it was possible) can't wait til' chp.5! lol! ttyl! courtney,fl |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2003 02:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!! It's about time!! I've been checking my inbox multiple times, daily, since you said you'd be updating this. ^.~
*grings* Rin is Sess's half-sis... how aDORable!!
*giggles and cheers as Sess destroys the mouse* Go Sess! *chanting* Kick-his-ass...kick-his...ASS!!! what a bastard... GRRRR!!!
*blinks* It's "that easy" to make butter? Huh. Prooves just how little (nothing) I know of cooking or food.
*ROFLMFAO* Don't tell me Jak has a thing for Sess... not that I blame him. ;) AND Sango!?!? *lol* I bet I drooled more than THEM!!! :D
“Oh my gosh! Forget the other one, pick him, pick him!” Jak cried out excitedly.
*rolls on floor somemore* I SOOOO agree!!
"So… when do I move in?" *faints*
"A triumphant grin transformed the young man's face, giving him a younger, carefree look." *melts*
*blinks* That was THE ... BEST email tag session I've EVER read in a fic!!!! (actually, the first... but the BEST!!!;) I found both of their responses realistic and refreshing... as well as flirty for them. ^_~ Sess's attitude/reactions were the BEST!!!
Though I had to wait for this (impatiently)... I'm SO glad I stayed up to read/review this when I finally saw the update email in my inbox!! ^^ (Though people have said it to me... YOU deserve a rating greater than 10 for this chapter!!:)
Sess needs a car!?!? Hmmm... (cars are important in stories because they give personality insight)... something roomy. (can't remember how often he's on business in SanFran) Would "S" rent? Probably. But I think he'd be rich enough to just BUY it. ;)
Personally, I think he'd pick a neutral color (a black or silver), but I don't know. (I like bright colors for cars, really; blues and reds). A color that signifies POWER... maybe.
I'd say give him a sports car, but... nah. (he doesn't need to compinsate;) Kag wouldn't be impressed with it. (If I were kag and could have more than one car, I'd have a mini or two and a... maybe a benz convertible. *lol*) Whatever car you pick for him... it needs to be able to hold a 6'+er comfortably. Acura? *shrugs* (he might like suv, but I don't care for them. too trucky) I know NOthing of new cars... just something roomy/powerful that is still sexy. (it HAS to fit his personality!!;) Maybe something older... hmm... *the debate will continue forever until you decide*
*shakes head at words/behavior* See what happens when I read/review just before I got to bed? My mind is on a one track train only to switch track again and again... I can't think, now. O.o
Write more!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: alexis On: June 30, 2003 23:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, I so love this story! I can't wait to read what happens when they go out for lunch! PLEASE update soon. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: MoonBunny14 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2003 19:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When are you going to write more?!?!?!?!? UPDATE MORE OFTEN!! also what is the name of your site? Great story! Update this story and your other stories! they're great!! UPDATE! ASAP!! |
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