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 Reviewed By: Simon Green [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 20, 2005 10:46 CST
Comment/Review:
Awesome! I can't wait to read more!
 Title: High regard for your efforts
Reviewed By: Amie (NSI)  On: December 16, 2005 13:47 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying your fic! Your dialogue is so lively and amusing, but you're skilled at action elements, too, a rare double whammy. You're really building an interesting, believable AU. I like having InuYasha and Kagome morphed into different bodies. Fun idea, having them have to discover strange and different powers, without having to resort to new color and textile power-ups for Tessaiga. I've rarely laughed out loud when reading fics, but I have with yours. Great stuff, as Carson used to say, and thanks for writing!
 Reviewed By: Kajunmom76 [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 02, 2005 16:49 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow! It must be so much fun inside your head!!Your stories are so damn funny!! and this one is certainly no exception!! I can't wait to see where this one leads,of course, some Kag and Inu fluff would be good too!! Great Job
 Title: Mellie
Reviewed By: Mellie [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 01, 2005 07:12 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like this, thank you for working so hard on it. Curious about all the Latin, but it works.
 Reviewed By: Cynbad146  On: November 29, 2005 20:39 CST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey, I left a review over at FF before I found this update. I am glad to get a "sketchy" chapter. It was very good, I thought. Just wish there was more because I was quite enjoying it. (Ended way too soon.) Did a machine get Kagome? Also, I like the way Kagome really depends on InuYasha in this story. (I really miss Green Tea.) Thank you, Cynbad146
 Reviewed By: Cynbad146  On: September 18, 2005 14:18 CDT
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ithilwen, Wow. . .this is a really different kind of story. Setting is AU, but storyline is not AU. How did you come up with this idea? How many chapters are you shooting for? I really am enjoying your unique work. It was great how InuYasha and Kagome woke up, and their immediate impressions. Don't stop now, keep going. Cynbad146 P.S. I too, hold up lighter for Green Tea (wipes tear from cheek.) Though not a member (lurker instead),I really enjoyed reading the serious thoughts there. Got any ideas of where ex-tea-ers will congregate?
 Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 17, 2005 22:02 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I must say, I really likes your story, and I hope you do keep going with it.
 Reviewed By: TwistedEvilStapler [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 20, 2005 22:26 CST
Comment/Review:
Great story. Hope you'll continue it!
 Reviewed By: Somebody Else [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 09, 2005 21:01 CST
Comment/Review:
I think I just submitted a review here that was meant to go to a different fic. ^^;; Sorry!
 Title: Wow. That sucked.
Reviewed By: Somebody Else [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 09, 2005 21:01 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
It is crazy, but I would not, by any stretch of the imagination, consider if funny. There are a lot of things wrong with this but I'll just go over the basics as dictated by the ratings. Style- First of all: dialogue. Your interactions with the characters felt really fake. I realize that flow is an objective thing, but this story is a really difficult read. That's probably why you're not getting many reviews. Also, I include characterization in style, and you had really horrible characterization. I usually let people get away with it when they're trying to be funny, but I get the impression you couldn't write them in character if you tried, so I'm going to rag on your about it. Let's know the rules before we break them. Spelling and Grammar- Get a beta. Or better yet, get a copy of The Elements of Style. It'll help the flow, too. Originality- No. Just... no. If you've ever READ fanfiction, you would know better. If you're going to use cliches you need to do them well (For a model of a well-done cliche, read the Harry Potter series.) Also, the potty humor is pathetic, and only that much because I'm being polite. I realize that it's used a lot in Teen Titans, so a little bit is fine, but you need to cut way back. Try making some grown-up jokes. Enjoyment Factor/Overall Rating: Sucky. Really sucky. I would reccommend a complete overhaul if not abandonment of this fic.
 Reviewed By: heeropeacecraft [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 08, 2004 19:09 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow. What in imagination. This is an excellent story and very well written.
 Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 08, 2004 01:17 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow confusing. So Naraku sent Kagome and Inu Yasha into the future were he had more control? But swtiched into Se and Ema's places. So what on earth is going on? Keep up the great work. coolsa.
 Reviewed By: oracle44 [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 07, 2004 23:47 CST
Comment/Review:
another great chapter.
 Reviewed By: chickenlover2_nli  On: December 07, 2004 18:05 CST
Comment/Review:
^-^ YEA! I am so happy! New chapters rock! Keep writing PLEASE! And wish me a happy b-day!^-^
 Reviewed By: tinkerbell [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 30, 2004 11:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please finish this story, I thought it was really interesting. What did Naraku do to them, who is Indis, where are they? Don't leave me haning
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