| "Sight Unseen" Reviews/Comments [ 50 ] |
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Reviewed By: Storm_410 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2003 11:39 CDT
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That was adorable. Very cute! You know, I love this story. Cant get enough of it. You really are a very talented writer! Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: REDWOLF On: October 07, 2003 10:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wish for once that Inuyasha could just be more mature, don't U?? And I wish Kagome would not be so forgiving to Inuyasha all the time. I wish someone else would start flirting with Kagome, maybe it would put a little realiztion in to Inuyasha!!
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Reviewed By: PJ On: October 02, 2003 01:36 CDT
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Just wanted to say I am really enjoying this story. I usually don't go through the rating thingy this site has but as far as I am concerned it is a great fic. Very original and creative. I really enjoy it. And about the grammer well I didn't find anything wrong. If there was I missed it. I am not a big grammer freak unless it makes the story difficult to read and understand. Again great story update soon please.
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Reviewed By: nightmagic17 On: October 01, 2003 20:09 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a good Story. I love it. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: chmsweety [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2003 15:33 CDT
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loved the story. write more!
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Reviewed By: meera On: September 27, 2003 13:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is such a good story!!! pls write some more:'(
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Reviewed By: Kria Devils [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2003 22:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok hi im me!!I would normally go on and on about me being crazy and all!But sence im running out of ideas,im just going to get to the point!!UPDATE,UPDATE,UPDATE!!PLEASE!!You have to!!imf you dont ill spred me crazyness to you!!BYE!(^_^)
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Reviewed By: Sandra165 On: September 26, 2003 16:47 CDT
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This is good! Write more!
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Reviewed By: BeckyK On: September 10, 2003 16:43 CDT
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I really like this story. You've got an interesting storyline going on here and your style is very nice as well. I also like what you've done with your characterization of the windwalkers -- original characters of that sort (your standard humanoid-but-with-wings type) can easily spill over into the territory of Mary Sue and Gary Stu-ism, but you've given your original characters enough depth and interest to avoid this pitfalling. Splendid job, and I hope to see more of this soon. |
Reviewed By: Storm_410 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2003 13:58 CDT
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Aww your so cruel! Poor Miroku... I feel bad for him. Although it does add yet another twist into your story which can only help. Kepe it up, like I've said before I am really REALLY enjoying this fic! Your an extreamlly talented writer. |
Reviewed By: Ciarra On: September 03, 2003 17:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic. It is very nicely written and i love how you added an extra love triangle in there;) I can't wait for more!! |
Reviewed By: Storm_410 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 22:45 CDT
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Wow I adore this! The new characters you've introduced are VERy interesting and most important unlike many original characters they are NOT flaky and boring!!!!! Thats the case in far to many fanfics. Anywho, keep it up I'll be eagerly awaiting the next installation. |
Reviewed By: AsianGurl On: July 28, 2003 16:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi my name is sakura ,and i read ur fanfic its great and all but you should have talked more about how to deal with kagomes eye blindness thing and well she should be cured in about 4 -5 chapters because this windwa;kers i dont really care for but the resyt is great keep on trying and you might even impress me with your story !!!! |
Reviewed By: appelcline [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2003 05:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent writing style and a very original storyline. This really isn't similar to any of the other Inu-Yasha fics I've read, which is quite an accomplishment!
I'm normally wary of unfinished fics, but this one interested me so much that I decided to read it anyway. Please do continue to update frequently, because I want to see what happens! |
Reviewed By: Storm_410 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2003 22:35 CDT
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That last chapter was so cute! Keep writing. I'm really enjoying this. *grins*
- Storm |
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