| "Bottled Genius" Reviews/Comments [ 220 ] |
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Reviewed By: hishiro On: July 05, 2003 06:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
OH AND THAT'S NOT A CLIFFHANGER?!?!?!?!?! that is sooooo not fair....ugh if this wasn't my favorite fic I wouldn't be telepathically trying to light your head on fire right now....lol..anyway please update soon or I will be forced to...well...do something SO THERE!....
p.s. I loved how you introduced miroku...lol...twice hehe |
Reviewed By: Morro On: July 04, 2003 16:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
When I first got the genneral jiff of what your fan fic was about, i didn't think it would be worth reading. Out of desparation of reading anything i tried it out, and I'm proud to say I was wrong. I am quite taken by the story so far! I am greatly enjoying it and am looking forward to finding out what happens next. I highly recomend you do some serrious writting and publish something!!! I see a great deal of tallent. I'm working on writting books of my own and I hope to perhaps see some of your work out there on the shelves one day if I don't make it :). I'm also glad you don't wait a week before you push out the next chapter, doesn't leave me hanging too badly. :) Keep going! |
Reviewed By: kitten On: July 04, 2003 14:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
why did you leaveit there! you must update soon! |
Reviewed By: koinu-chan On: July 04, 2003 01:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story... pleeze hurry and update... i wanna know what happens! |
Reviewed By: chi_dono [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2003 16:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You CANNOT leave it right there!! This sucks! I hate cliffhangers! Does Kagome die??? Does Inuyasha save her by beaking a rule?? what'll happen to Inu if he breaks a rule?? What about Naraku? GOD!! i want to know!
this fic is truely awesome! i love it! it is hilarious! Espeicially when Kagome said, "Bite me!" then said, "No wait, dont bite me!" lol funny stuff. You are SUCH a great writer! I love your style, and the idea! I never would've come up with something like this! very original! keep on writing!! |
Reviewed By: kari On: July 02, 2003 18:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Best Fic eva! I've read a lot of fics, but this fic makes me keep on comming back for more. It is an awesome story!!! Pleaz keep updating. I can't wait to see what happens. (Also i have a heart problem. Pleaz don't keep me in suspense cauz i can die soon. j/k) |
Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2003 12:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY! UR AN AMAZING WRITER PLEASE UPDATE MORE! o a question for you can u put life exchange on this site? u dont have to but i was just wondering. well keep going! |
Reviewed By: Usagitsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2003 10:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh!Kagome!!
*cry*poor Kagome!!
And Inuyasha is going to suffer of it too now!!!
;____;Pooooor Inuyasha!!!
Damn that Naraku!!!
Please do something!!kick Naraku's dirty ass (in a sadistic way paying back all he's done!!) and make them be together,pleeease!!(it's just so sad!!)
^_^good work !!It's breath taking!What an evil cliffhanger!!^.~Don't let us hanging please! |
Reviewed By: hishiro On: July 02, 2003 02:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
VERY VERY GOOD!!!!!Definetly one of my favorites!!!!.....don't keep us hangin!!!!!I'll go crazy *GRRRRR* |
Reviewed By: Usagitsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2003 12:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAHHHH!!!Inuyasha! wake up!!!!Kagome is in danger!!
(but How dumb can be this girl even with fever, to go to Naraku??It's creepy!!!)
No!Don't let her die!!
Wanna know what happens next!!!Please go on!^.^ |
Reviewed By: Usagitsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2003 16:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahahah!
I found the whole 'club' thingie and Inuyasha's attempts to make Kagome understand, really hilarious!!!^___^
Yay!Definitely one of my fav'fanfic!!
Go on!! |
Reviewed By: fire_goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2003 15:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wish Naraku could just walk off a cliff and die too! I liked the whole Inuyasha turning into a dog thing! That was just too cute! |
Reviewed By: Llorona On: June 23, 2003 12:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic! Please finish it!! |
Reviewed By: **kit On: June 22, 2003 19:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hi! This is the first time ever I reviewed on mediaminer, so consider me an impressed reader. Honestly when I read you summary I was not at all tempted to read your story, I'm not the greatest fan of the general idea with Iy being a genie...sorry, wishbringer, and frankly, it sounded not really that interesting. Now I'm more than happy to have read it since you write fantastic; beginning on unimportant things like length of chapters and updating rate, over to dialogue and story telling contains and finally story content. You know, I study literature and read fanfics for years now, so I know what I'm talking about. You manage to keep important parallels to the original story (which lots of AU are missing) and draw a wonderful atmopshere between Iy and Kagome, that keeps the reader hanging, hoping of course for more.
I'm now eagerly awaiting updates, hope you can cope with the good work you did so far, I sure hope it!
- **kit |
Reviewed By: Sonomi On: June 22, 2003 15:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this fanfic!! The loop holes is a pretty good idea. I remember pulling something like that, when I got myself a glass full of water, someone said that they would like water to. *grins* |
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