| "Feudal Weather Witch" Reviews/Comments [ 86 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2003 07:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
hmmm. i do feel that her powers are a little off, but i can't quite come up with something else. so i think that it is fime. besides, to change her powers now would mean that we on the rieciving end of this fic would have to wait even more for an update while you rewrote. ;)
actually, if u do decide to rewrite, i would think maybe something along the lines of what the old character jubaly had in the old cartoon. except something more solid and not a stupid as little sparks. maybe something she can throw with her arows, like gambit and his cards. something to feed off her already existing priestes powers.
whatever you choose will be fine by me though. please update soon. :D |
Reviewed By: Scruffy the Janitor [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 09:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Scruffy is aware that you read my review. And thanks for answering my question.BTW I think from observation, (also knowing that the second door has been open)cartoonnetwork may be showing the episode as well.
Scruffy |
Reviewed By: Shiva On: July 22, 2003 13:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please!
Just leave her powers as they are!
It's perfect, the way it is! |
Reviewed By: jammies2000 On: July 21, 2003 22:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
Of course her being stronger and enhanced senses would make her too much like Logan and Inuyasha that would be too much of the same.... so may want to leave it she seems to be doing good with the powers she got. Sorry ment to say this in the first review
PJ |
Reviewed By: jammies2000 On: July 21, 2003 21:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is very good as far as Kagome's powers are concerned her having powers like Storm is ok... I am more of a 'kit it's butt' type of person so her being stronger or having more 'enhanced senses' would be what I would do... but it is your story so you write it the way you want it.
PJ |
Reviewed By: Vorsith On: July 19, 2003 20:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad, I wish she had different powers though,only because Storms a fave of mine.But that aside I am really enjoying this!Please continue! |
Reviewed By: julia On: July 16, 2003 12:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great fanfic! It's really good!
I hope the next chapter comes soon,
pleeeze I'm so curious! |
Reviewed By: Scruffy the Janitor [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2003 16:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Scruffy realy likes this story, and I have something to point out. Coming this fall KidsWB will be showing the episode where the final door will be open, so is this story like an alternate to that episode? Keep up the good work
Scruffy |
Reviewed By: Usagitsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2003 11:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hullo!!^_^
Original one!!This is getting interesting !
Please, write more! |
Reviewed By: Corky On: July 01, 2003 23:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS FIC! =D This is just...THE best crossover I've ever read! ^.^ I hope you update soon! Not that I'm trying to rush you or anything. n.n I'm just in love with this fic! |
Reviewed By: gonbaun On: June 26, 2003 05:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
please write more chapters pretty soon |
Reviewed By: Scruffy the Janitor [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2003 16:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!Scruffy incourages author to Update as soon as posible.Great job. Please make the chapters as long as possible!REVIEWREVIEWREVIEWREVIEW
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Reviewed By: catarllsasami On: June 25, 2003 12:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
Purrrrrrrrrrrrrrfect.But Hey I know and I mean KNOW as in I have met him and he almost never keeps promosises.......DUH!! |
Reviewed By: Persephone of Abydos On: June 24, 2003 21:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is, without a doubt, the best damn crossover fanfic I have read in years. In years! |
Reviewed By: Fyrloche [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2003 06:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad, not bad at all. Are the X-men in here based on the comic or on the X-men Evolution series? |
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