| "Obsession Confession" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
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Reviewed By: AolaniDathomir [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2003 21:47 CST
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Well, I thought it was a nice lemon...not too stretched out but enough to make it nice...poor poor Aya...evil Brad that I love so much...and stupid but idiotic Schu, that has no clues whatsoever when it comes to doing anything useful... poor, poor Omi..and Youji..and Kenken...*sads for all the lovely bishies and pines for more of 'Revenge'. Give us more soon, please, on this one and 'Revenge'; the wait is torturous...;) good job, as usual...
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Reviewed By: Simply Kim On: November 07, 2003 07:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wah! Brad was so mean! I feel sorry for Ran... I really do... will his torture ever cease? Hmm... I guess I have to wait and find out...
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Reviewed By: Rei Eien On: November 07, 2003 01:21 CST
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Oh my. Poor Ran. Though I love BradxRan together, I must say that Ran just got the short end of the stick. Then again, Brad is being the cold, calculating Brad ne? What`s more, he`s shattering all of Ran`s illusions of Brad. Will it be possible for things between them to work out?
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Reviewed By: AolaniDathomir [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2003 09:53 CDT
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wow! Once again, super fabulous! I like all of your writing, but this one is quite interesting...Now question is, how many tons of mouth wash is Brad going to go home and use...again. Aww, poor Kenken, but Schu will take good care of him...I hope...hmm, what will Aya do? What will Youji do without his best friend? And poor little Omi...Aya's such a jerk...okay, obsesssed kitten, but Omi's wonderful. He needs to wake up and smell the flowers...;) |
Reviewed By: FM (Fata Morgana) [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2003 05:32 CDT
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^__^ I love the way Brad act in this fic. Hey!! I love Bradley Crawford no matter what and I hope that *cough* jerk *cough* acting Crawford fell into Ran's arm ... *singing a la-la-la happy song* |
Reviewed By: AolaniDathomir [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2003 12:03 CDT
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Jeez, wow! Horrible place to stop really, but it definatly insures return interest. This is really awesome, and I don't want it to stop but I do want to find out what's going to happen! Poor KenKen and woo, Brad is deliciously yummy. He can fake being warmer than a frigid iceberg quite well. |
Reviewed By: MiniMorr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2003 14:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Damn, I'm almost feeling a little sorry for Omi. Notice the "almost" though... *grins evilly and forces her Mini-Omi to watch while her Mini-Brad and Mini-Aya cuddles*
Hmmmmm... Interesting chapter this one; both with Weiss and with Schwarz. :) I like how you had Crawford see what would have happened, but just because dear ol' Schu-Schu couldn't stick to the plan... Hehehe... It's going to be interesting, very interesting to see how they're going to make it work now. :)
But damn, Schu would be hot together with Yohji... *starts drooling* Ahem. But Yotan and Schu AND Kenken is good... VERY good... *insert mad cackling fangirl laughter here*
Oh, and don't mind my whining about the chapters being short - it was just the fangirl starving for some CrawfordxAya-action in me talking. ;)
Looking forward to more, as always! More Crawford/Aya! I want more, I tell you! More! *goes on ranting and ranting* *gets smacked by muse and dragged off to work*
~MiniMorr |
Reviewed By: . On: August 03, 2003 17:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
das good ja. |
Reviewed By: AolaniDathomir [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2003 01:28 CDT
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Aww, poor not understanding Omi! All protective Youji! Crawford's gonna drive Aya insane...*giggles* Aya's funny when he's crazy. Then he and farfie maight make good companions...Bad Schu, hurting poor KenKen, but then Youji gets to take care of him!! Write more soon! |
Reviewed By: MiniMorr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2003 06:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Okay, so I was going to review earlier, but it just slipped my mind, I'm so sorry!
Anyway, I liked these two chapters and thank you for the Mini-Aya too! *forces her Mini-Brad and Mini-Aya to cuddle while taking snapshots for future blackmailing*
This is, as usual, very good chapters, and I want to see more! :) I feel a bit sorry for Omi, but not enough to want him to end up with Aya this time (or ever... *shudders*) - it's Brad/Aya all the way now!!! *grin*
The only thing I'm going to complain about is the fact that the chapters are too short!!! I want more! More! Mooooore! *gets smacked by evil muse*
Ahem. Sorry 'bout that... *sheepish grin*
Take your time with the writer's block too - I know what a pain that is! *shudders* Don't force yourself if you don't feel up to it, we'll be waiting patiently for you to continue. :) |
Reviewed By: Jene On: July 24, 2003 18:37 CDT
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good chapter. cannot wait for next one. |
Reviewed By: simply_kim [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2003 05:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god... that is so great... please continue the fic! I would really love to read it! ^___^ |
Reviewed By: MiniMorr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2003 05:41 CDT
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Yes! Please do continue! :)
There are NEVER enough Crawford/Aya-fics, I say! :)
~MiniMorr |
Reviewed By: Talyssa On: June 12, 2003 15:13 CDT
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Oooo if this doesn't turn into a Crawford/Aya fic I'll NEVER forgive you! Such an underappreciated pairing and they're so pretty together.
>.> |
Reviewed By: Rei Eien On: August 18, 2003 20:46 CDT
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OMG! That was too close. Way to close. What if Yohji had caught them? The suspense ne. And, I'm sure Yohji would question what took Aya so long if Schwarz has already been taking care of. Poor Aya.
And there's definitely not enought BradxRan to go around. I can't wait to read more and I don't care if it's short as long as there's Brad and Ran together. ^.~ |
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