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"Fight For The Hikari Cherub" Reviews/Comments [ 55 ]
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 Reviewed By: Malik's Girl  On: August 02, 2003 13:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
How dare you! Do you think you are the only one who knows who Namu is?!?!?!? Namu or Marik would never hang around mortal filth like you!!!!!!
P.S. Marik and Malik are NOT gay!! Beleive me, I know. If you don't beleive me, go to the story Adrenaline by Lucsiousdragon. Read the reveiws and you'll see what I mean.
 Reviewed By: pissedfan  On: August 01, 2003 23:58 CDT
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thaaaaannnnnnnkkkkkk you! Your so sweet! ahhhhhhh, I might change my name to happyfan, buuuuuttttt then again you did leave me at a cliffy, sooooo I'll stay pissed till the next update or maybe just till you finish the story, I love it.
 Reviewed By: pissedfan  On: August 01, 2003 08:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
that was great and thanks soooooo much for updating, buuuuuttttttt I hope that yugi will come back, please, please let Yugi come back.
 Reviewed By: GoddessNagi [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 31, 2003 23:41 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
this is coming along nicely..please keep it up...i would love to see it finshen and me reading it...most storys amuse me..but this one is a true keep...and i mean it...
 Reviewed By: XxNeko_YoukaixX  On: July 24, 2003 16:08 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i hope Yami wins he has to win to get Yugi back, its just so cute seeing them together. Seto better back off to & go back to joey they are also cute together
 Reviewed By: fannywanny  On: July 17, 2003 15:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
You updated! So how's canada, fun? well remember: there's no place like home Allllllll! Poor Yugi, having to be a girl (although that is the best thing in the world) buuuuuutttttt, I believe Yami is fallin for this girl and is gonna forget about Yugi (noooooooooooo!) please update, but have fun on vacation, oh and remember- "do it with a :D
 Reviewed By: fannywanny  On: July 17, 2003 15:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
You updated! So how's canada, fun? well remember: there's no place like home Allllllll! Poor Yugi, having to be a girl (although that is the best thing in the world) buuuuuutttttt, I believe Yami is fallin for this girl and is gonna forget about Yugi (noooooooooooo!) please update, but have fun on vacation, oh and remember- "do it with a :D
 Reviewed By: fannywanny  On: July 17, 2003 15:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
You updated! So how's canada, fun? well remember: there's no place like home Allllllll! Poor Yugi, having to be a girl (although that is the best thing in the world) buuuuuutttttt, I believe Yami is fallin for this girl and is gonna forget about Yugi (noooooooooooo!) please update, but have fun on vacation, oh and remember- "do it with a :D
 Reviewed By: fannywanny  On: July 17, 2003 15:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
You updated! So how's canada, fun? well remember: there's no place like home Allllllll! Poor Yugi, having to be a girl (although that is the best thing in the world) buuuuuutttttt, I believe Yami is fallin for this girl and is gonna forget about Yugi (noooooooooooo!) please update, but have fun on vacation, oh and remember- "do it with a :D
 Reviewed By: pissedfan  On: July 17, 2003 14:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well I'm not really pissed this time, actually and am really really happy. Euphoria is flowing through my blood. Thanks so much for updating. I love this fic, but please don't let Yami fall in love with Yumi and forget about Yugi (although they're same people, but not really so......) Hope you will be able to finish this and your other stories. ^_______________________________^ i'm so happy
 Reviewed By: pissedfan  On: July 08, 2003 21:42 CDT
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NOOOOOOOO,do you not realize that reading these stories is my life. I have nothing better to do during the summer. You have to a least try to update while in Canada. I mean, I understand that you have a life and your going on vacation and don't want to waste it typing and being on the computer, but come on, my happiness rest in your hands. Do you know how utterly difficult it is to fine a decent story around here, especially a decent yami/yugi without yami having to share his feelings with seto (man that pisses me off). Anyway *eyes droop in saddness* I hope you have fun and learn plenty of French ok( I think Canadians speak French) and try.....at least try.....to update and sorry I don't have any ideas I leave the writing and creativity to the writers, but you can make Yami win the race because somehow he figures out that it's Yugi, no no, Seto figures it out and....and....heeeeee....ah, sorry, all out of ideas. *knocks on forehead* Yep, its empty....gotta go recharge. Have Fun!
 Reviewed By: gypsy&carl  On: July 08, 2003 20:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
gypsy: poor yugi everything always happen to him. His lover is starting to make out with someone else, but in reailty he is making out with the correct person, but yami doesn't know that, therefore he is making out with the wrong person because he thinks it someone else, when it is the right person, but not in his mind, which makes him a cheating whore.

carl: O.O?

gypsy: don't worry I didn't expect your underhanded mind to comprehend something as complex as the thoughts of my mind *sticks head up in a boastful attitude way*

Carl: *sweat drop*

gypsy: *aggravated from Carl's lack of speech* Don't just stand there looking stupid, say something of great importance, or not, just....SOMETHING!

Carl: update soon.

gypsy: @.@

Carl: *smiles with satisfactory
 Reviewed By: fairy  On: July 08, 2003 19:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
update soon. pleeeeeeaaaaaase. I'll give you a my size teddy bear if you do -_-!* holds up 6 inch teddy*
 Reviewed By: fannywanny  On: July 02, 2003 16:00 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
A++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++(you get the idea right) please hurry and get back I can barely wait right now nonetheless one and a half weeks. hurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyy. I can't stand to wait. i'm very very impatient when it comes to things i want and i always get what I want when I want it *shoots a killer glare*
 Reviewed By: Joey'z sk8ter gurl  On: June 30, 2003 21:11 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love this fic!! I know that you broke Seto and Jou up, but can you make it so they could get back together,pwese? I simply adore that paring and it was perfect in Elemntal Mages ( is that right?) but it makes me sad that Seto broke up with Jou for Yugi ( no offense but he sucks!).
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