Reviewed By: Cc (Candace) On: July 02, 2003 01:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
That is really cute so far, a nice beginning! I can't wait to see the next chapter and get down to the actual babbysitting. Trunks can be such a brat, it's going to be funny! I really have never seen GT, so I don;t really know what Bura is like, I just know that Vegeta seems to favor her or something. I do notice the ages are out of whack, seeing that Trunks is like 7 years older then her, but it's allright. Good job so far, keep it up! And the spacing was a great rest on my eyes, I prefer it much better then crammed into one huge paragrpah. LOL, great work, keep it up. You got the suggestion out quickly too! ^.^ I'm proud. See you later! Update soon! |
