| "babysitting blues" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Title: Funny!!!
Reviewed By: BLuYY On: February 18, 2004 14:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I totally love this fan fic! Please try to update soon!
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Reviewed By: Veggie-sama On: January 06, 2004 10:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story! I thought the flashback of Vegeta 'flushing' the cat down the toilet was funny! I can't wait til the next chap!
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Reviewed By: Swana On: August 09, 2003 21:05 CDT
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Sorry it's been forever since I reviewed, but I just wanted to say: GREAT WORK! keep it up and maybe get into the pranks next chappie!? SOON!?
It'd be funny to see them in twouble with Veggie! Hehe!! Ty! |
Reviewed By: bob On: August 09, 2003 21:02 CDT
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CROCKODILE HUNTER!
He's silly. HEEEEEEEEEEEEEe ^______^
UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Hehe On: August 09, 2003 20:52 CDT
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LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Aww On: July 19, 2003 23:49 CDT
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hehehehe, really sweet. Keep it up |
Reviewed By: Monkey On: July 19, 2003 23:48 CDT
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Cute!! Keep it up!!!! |
Reviewed By: sessieluv2 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2003 11:03 CDT
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I love this fanfic please continue!!!!Update!!!!!1 |
Reviewed By: Yugiboy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2003 13:33 CDT
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This is funny,get on with the pranks |
Reviewed By: Oo... On: July 05, 2003 15:14 CDT
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More!! |
Reviewed By: Swana On: July 02, 2003 01:20 CDT
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That was really cute so far!!! I want to see what happens next. I love Veggie Head fics with lil Trunks. And maybe you could put a lil romance between Bulma and Veggie Head. Hehe oh and it would be funny cute if Trunks /and or Bura got in trouble and Veggie spanks them. Just a suggie! Hehe great work and update soon plz!!! |
Reviewed By: o_o On: July 02, 2003 01:16 CDT
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dood dat wuz reely kool come o/w mooooooore! heeeeeeeeeeee |
Reviewed By: Rach On: July 02, 2003 01:14 CDT
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Cute! I hope you come out with more. A little advice, I just noticed you are using some commas in the place of periods. Not a big deal as it's not too noticable, but you might want to fix that. Otherwise, fantabulous! Lol |
Reviewed By: Cc (Candace) On: July 02, 2003 01:13 CDT
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That is really cute so far, a nice beginning! I can't wait to see the next chapter and get down to the actual babbysitting. Trunks can be such a brat, it's going to be funny! I really have never seen GT, so I don;t really know what Bura is like, I just know that Vegeta seems to favor her or something. I do notice the ages are out of whack, seeing that Trunks is like 7 years older then her, but it's allright. Good job so far, keep it up! And the spacing was a great rest on my eyes, I prefer it much better then crammed into one huge paragrpah. LOL, great work, keep it up. You got the suggestion out quickly too! ^.^ I'm proud. See you later! Update soon! |
Reviewed By: Dbz Chicka On: July 05, 2003 14:50 CDT
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Very cute! FEED YOUR FISH!! o_O Lol, I can't wait to see the next chap when the kids start getting into trouble. What's an ouji to do?? I hope you update soon!! |
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