| "Love of a Kit" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: Foxi-kun [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2003 15:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now that is something new... nice idea with the Sango/Shippo pairing. Now i want to see how Miroku reacts... Keep going.
Btw: I think I got a new favorite story^^ |
Reviewed By: lah_b On: July 27, 2003 23:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
Heyo. ^^ Cute fic so far. So you want ideas huh? I got a few. SO when you do throw Miroku in the mix (which you definately should) and their both courting Sango, you should have Shippo play dirty. After all, Kitsune are tricksters by nature. They could both do the getting flowers gig to start out with. But something goes horribly horribly wrong!! *cue thunder and lightning* Maybe allergies or bees or something. They should both fail miserably at that escapade. Later on, when Shippo feels threatened by Miroku you can have him use his magic to make Miroku look bad. (Worse than he looks as a corrupted, perverted, girl-chasing, buddhist priest) Inuyasha's love advice would definately help Shippo in that respect. He'd probably say something like 'Let no rival stand in your way' and a crude description of love and courting as a battle and an inflated-ego version of how he made Kouga and 'Hobo' back off his woman. The girls can catch Inu corrupting impressionable Shippo's mind with that maybe. Anyways, somebody could catch him trying to make Miroku look bad (like the M-man himself)and chase him around trying to wring his neck right in front of Sango. The boys could also try there part in the 'Romantic-getaway-away-in-a-private-spot' portion of the festivities. (which Miroku would fail miserably at because of his love of the female form ^^;;) Anyways, hope I helped you out a bit. Its really cute so far and I'd love to read the rest of it. Update soon. ^^ |
Reviewed By: Mala Valvah On: July 27, 2003 20:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A rare couple. I like the fiction. Do continue. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: SSJ_DarkStar713 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2003 22:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
hehe...good better than I expected...just pray this isn't the only review that is left on here...now that would be very sad...and trust me you will be getting yelled at if you don't work on the next chapter...but hey what are friends for....and trust me...as you know...I'm not that much better at not procrastinating...hehe... |
Reviewed By: Inu-chan On: July 15, 2003 14:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting. Update please! |
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