| "Love of a Kit" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: Hell's lil Bitch On: September 19, 2003 23:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have a little sng for u i dont care what melody u use or anything but here it goes: Make a sequal, Make a sequal. Make a sEEeequal, if u doont i'll Kick ur aass so make a seeeequal.
hope u liked it! hahahahaha, Ja,ne? ~_^*winks* |
Reviewed By: Sundragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2003 20:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
I Love the story. I forgive you for the Fluffy incident. I have two things to ask. 1- Will you be writing a sequel? 2- if not, Will you please write another chapter to finish it. Great Job. Ja Ne |
Reviewed By: Chyna On: September 01, 2003 02:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please keep writting I'm loving it! |
Title: love of a kit
Reviewed By: phona On: September 01, 2003 02:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gave it a nine because I like it, I think it's preety good. |
Reviewed By: lkn On: September 01, 2003 00:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im loving it. Please keep on writing. |
Reviewed By: Cami On: August 31, 2003 23:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Heh... I just couldn't stop laughing through the entire thing! I don't know... I kinda imagined Shippo having Kouga's body, gourry's face, (from slayers) and tusuki's personality... (from fushigi yuugi) ah, well. He's hot, in any case... Yum...
You have killed chibi shippo for me. Damn you. *sobs softly* |
Reviewed By: Sundragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2003 16:32 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is a great story. The last chapter is so funny! *falls of chair laughing which causes family to mummur something about medicine* Okay sorry, I'm back. HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO FLUFFY? |
Reviewed By: Queen Mongoose [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2003 05:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
We don't hate you!!! Shut up you big crybaby, your fic's good!! Lol...anyways, I'm still wondering why you only have this much reviews!! Confused...very confused... |
Reviewed By: Queen Mongoose [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2003 05:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! This fic really caught my eye. Very interesting...unusual, but unusually interesting. Anyways, I had this whole agruement with myself whether to read it or not, but I am glad that I chose to read it!! (Arguement with myself? hehehe....) Well, it is getting quite interesting...ok, I am definitely repeating myself, but anyways...I'm gonna go read the other chapters...ignore me!! |
Reviewed By: pawthorn On: August 11, 2003 11:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is an interesting spin-off of inu yasha.
i like it i like it.
ill be waiting on the edge of my seat for another chapter! *face-plants*
owwwww maybe not so far on the edge...... |
Reviewed By: Foxi-kun [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2003 15:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now that is something new... nice idea with the Sango/Shippo pairing. Now i want to see how Miroku reacts... Keep going.
Btw: I think I got a new favorite story^^ |
Reviewed By: lah_b On: July 27, 2003 23:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
Heyo. ^^ Cute fic so far. So you want ideas huh? I got a few. SO when you do throw Miroku in the mix (which you definately should) and their both courting Sango, you should have Shippo play dirty. After all, Kitsune are tricksters by nature. They could both do the getting flowers gig to start out with. But something goes horribly horribly wrong!! *cue thunder and lightning* Maybe allergies or bees or something. They should both fail miserably at that escapade. Later on, when Shippo feels threatened by Miroku you can have him use his magic to make Miroku look bad. (Worse than he looks as a corrupted, perverted, girl-chasing, buddhist priest) Inuyasha's love advice would definately help Shippo in that respect. He'd probably say something like 'Let no rival stand in your way' and a crude description of love and courting as a battle and an inflated-ego version of how he made Kouga and 'Hobo' back off his woman. The girls can catch Inu corrupting impressionable Shippo's mind with that maybe. Anyways, somebody could catch him trying to make Miroku look bad (like the M-man himself)and chase him around trying to wring his neck right in front of Sango. The boys could also try there part in the 'Romantic-getaway-away-in-a-private-spot' portion of the festivities. (which Miroku would fail miserably at because of his love of the female form ^^;;) Anyways, hope I helped you out a bit. Its really cute so far and I'd love to read the rest of it. Update soon. ^^ |
Reviewed By: Mala Valvah On: July 27, 2003 20:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A rare couple. I like the fiction. Do continue. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: SSJ_DarkStar713 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2003 22:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
hehe...good better than I expected...just pray this isn't the only review that is left on here...now that would be very sad...and trust me you will be getting yelled at if you don't work on the next chapter...but hey what are friends for....and trust me...as you know...I'm not that much better at not procrastinating...hehe... |
Reviewed By: Inu-chan On: July 15, 2003 14:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting. Update please! |
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