| "On The Sea" Reviews/Comments [ 207 ] |
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Reviewed By: Gymnast988 On: July 22, 2003 01:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! Keep up the good work! I cant wait for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Sai-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 23:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
aww sweet! UPDATE SOON! u have to! ^_____^ still love it!
Purple |
Reviewed By: chi_dono [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 23:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
great new chapter! Poor Kag, all that hard work. You got me really nervous when Miroku wanted to speak to Kagome after class though. update SOOOOON |
Reviewed By: dranged fan fic lover On: July 21, 2003 21:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gr8 update soon |
Reviewed By: .:.LizziE.:. On: July 21, 2003 19:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
i just have a question is inu gonna be in this one?? |
Reviewed By: Loki On: July 21, 2003 18:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought the story was great! I thinkis is excelent how you make the chapters fairly long. It is always nice. It seems like you know a lot about boats. I don't so I couldn't be much help there but I thought it was really great! I can't wait to read the next one. I really enjoy your writing style as well. It is highly entertaining and I hope you continue!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
:) |
Reviewed By: chi_dono [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 14:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very cool story!! I love it! I hope you write really long chapters, by the way. It is more fun to read that way! I'll admit, although i can see Kagome all dressed up as a guy, short hair and all, i simply CANNOT see Inuyasha in one of those outfits with the frillies on the shirt. lol. The concept of Kagome becoming a pirate is great! lol keep on writing, becuase i'll be checking daily for updates!! |
Reviewed By: Lor [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 03:30 CDT
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why does it need to be shorter? I write fic chapters longer then that or as least as long! Loved it by the way. Kagome flipp'n out seeing herself in the mirror priceless! |
Reviewed By: Loki On: July 21, 2003 00:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thoroughly enjoyed your story! I hope you continue to write! I love the fact that you make the story long...That makes it more interesting and I don't think you should change the length of the chapters at all unless you get tired of writing that much. I look forward to reading more and I think that it is one of the best starts to a story I have read. Please continue! |
Reviewed By: dranged fan fic lover On: July 20, 2003 23:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it update soon |
Reviewed By: Pan On: July 20, 2003 21:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's a great story! but, it this an inu/kag story? I hope so, because I don't read anything other then that. |
Reviewed By: Pan On: July 20, 2003 21:48 CDT
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It's a great story! but, it this an inu/kag story? |
Reviewed By: sesshyangel On: July 20, 2003 21:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wah!!! i thought it was a new chapter. this was up on fanfic right? I want the next chapter. Once I get that, then perhaps I'll really review.
I love pirate fics btw. I like the possibilities this fic holds. [i think i already told you that in another review?] Hehe, can't be too easy to pretend to be a boy when you're raised to be a lady. |
Reviewed By: Corky [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2003 21:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic! ^^ The whole concept of Kagome walking around like a guy is kinda weird, but it's what gives the story...a story? O.o; Anyway, Kagome needs a name. I don't think she'd walk around calling herself "Kagome" when people are out looking for her.
Anyway, loved the story! ^^ Can't wait for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Sai-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 02:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
awwww kickin! i love it! u have to update soon! very soon! or....or....i'll cry. ^.^' anyway this is a good fic i really really like it.
Purple |
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