| "A Shard in Kyoto" Reviews/Comments [ 53 ] |
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Reviewed By: cdkobasiuk [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2003 16:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
This could be really great. I am very interested. cat
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Title: Momma Cat
Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2003 04:13 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ok, I meant to go to bed after the last review, but I couldn't leave this story alone. I am interested on how Sango handles the two drunks. Please please please continue.
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Title: Momma Cat
Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2003 03:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Your last reviewer is from the year '69.*hentai thoughts* I have only read the first two chapters so far but this is a excellent story. I would like for you not to give up on it. I want to know though, will there be lemon? *hopeful eyes*
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Reviewed By: c_vega On: December 31, 1969 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're doing a great job of keeping the characters in character and making their situation plausable. The historical authenticity is making this story all the more enjoyable without being too heavy handed on details and facts. I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Mellie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2003 20:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hurry Jeff, we need more to read. This is nice an intricate, so I know it takes a lot of thought. Inu would be able to go in the city when he is human... I like this, but then all your work is super. Keep it up!!! |
Reviewed By: Tom On: August 11, 2003 18:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finish This Story Don't leave Me Hanging |
Reviewed By: Geshron Tyler On: July 25, 2003 09:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this sounds like quite an ambitious project. I liked "When Friends find Out", and the first chapter of this story was a good read. I've always wanted to see the gang get caught up more in some of the intrigues and wars that were going on in the time. I would have expected them to run afoul of some daimyo and his armies by now, hunting jewel fragments, or at least investigating the trail of destruction and death that the quest for the shards has left behind. So, I hope that your story gives us a look at how the Inu gang try to cope with the very center of Japanese civilzation at the time, and hope that your research pays off. |
Reviewed By: MommyRogers [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2003 01:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't think I've ever seen anything like this before. I admire your historical authenticity, and how you don't let it get in the way of the story. I appreciate that you keep the characters in character. |
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