| "On a Leash" Reviews/Comments [ 287 ] |
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Title: Seeking a Fictions Anonamous
Reviewed By: IfICouldMarryInuyashaIWould On: June 28, 2004 18:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I need Fanfictions Anonamous because I'm fighting an addiction with this story. (get it AA?) I might need a patch or some gum, because I need my fix!!! I feel like one of those crackwhores who sell their family's furniture for drug money. Surely you wouldn't force me to stoop so low? ~I.I.C.M.I.I.W.
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Title: Good chapter...
Reviewed By: ssp51201 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 18:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like how Sango is going to train Inuyasha, what better way for him to become stronger. Plus, I thought it was sad, wrong and bad that he has to be put back into the collar. Makes sense though, but man, it's gotta suck to be him. Thanks for the update, and Happy birthday! Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: name in review On: June 24, 2004 17:37 CDT
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LoL. Inuyasha's not happy bout this little detail.LoL. Poor Inuyasha has to become a dog again. Miroku is still grabbing butts too. LoL I liked how you tied them all into the story like the original story. They're all trying to defeat Naraku. Cept Sesshy, he's different. But good different. Anyways. LOVE THE STORY! KEEP GOING! Aiko_is_a_Miko
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Title: I LOVE YOU
Reviewed By: IfICouldMArryInuyashaIWould On: June 24, 2004 15:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can I just say that you are AWESOME. You're the same age as me, and you capture all of the characters perfectly!!! Every time I see the big red NEW next to this fiction, I FLIP OUT!! If there was a fan club for you, I'd be president. Hey, why don't I start one? Hmm, something to think about. Anyways, HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! Ja ne! ~I.I.C.M.I.I.W P.S.- So-called "pointless" fluff in stories is my favorite kind of fluff, even better than marshmallow fluff on fluff'n'nutter sandwiches and cotton candy fluff, and waaaaay better than dryer lint fluff. Again, ja ne!!!
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Title: pleeeease UPDATE!!!?
Reviewed By: IfICouldMarryInuyashaIWould On: June 21, 2004 09:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I keep seeing the big yellow UPDATE next to the title of your fiction, and I get exceite because I think it's a new one, but nope, still chapter 18. I LOVE THIS FICTION!!! I also love your one shot Soil, Seeds, and Water. Keep writing!!!
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Title: Love it!
Reviewed By: ssp51201 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 17:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, what a great story! I love it, and I'm glad that Inuyasha is now back to his original form. This story is definitely original, and I think you have an awesome imagination! I'm looking forward to the next chapter! Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha_For_Ever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 21:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
yay!!!!! awesome chapter!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Queen Klu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 21:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
ummmmm... maybe this was just me, but that fluff was kinda pointless even for fluff. even tho i can't wait until Mom walks in on them in bed! BWAHAHAHAHA!! i'm demented.
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Title: Eat good fish!
Reviewed By: Fuyumiko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 19:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Though reading it right after reading 'Rules of Acquisition' felt really weird >.
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Reviewed By: Aiko (2 lazy 2 login) On: June 17, 2004 18:28 CDT
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This was a cute chapter! lol. When's Inuyasha gonna kiss her already? lol Arigato! Aiko_Is_A_Miko
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Reviewed By: HAILY On: June 16, 2004 20:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is turing out great! Good job so far!
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Reviewed By: HAILY On: June 16, 2004 19:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story!!!!!
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Reviewed By: FallenAngel1990 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 16:36 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love uour fic. This is a very creative idea. FallenAngel1990
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Title: Bravo!
Reviewed By: Aiko_Is_A_Miko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 00:21 CDT
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Very, very, very, very, very good! Inuyasha needs his mouth washed out! Such language he uses around his love! lol. Thanks for the updates!
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Reviewed By: Queen Klu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 22:53 CDT
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wow! i was a tad bit scared you'd botch the whole "omg, my dog's a hanyou" thing, but you did alright! there are things i guess i would have focussed more on, like...didn't 'Taisho' kiss her? i can't remember, maybe that was just wishful thinking on my part. oh, well, too lazy to go back and check noo! Um, chappy 2. It was really great, and i'm glad you didn't have Kagome really flipping out when he got huffy over her accusing him of being jealous. i mean, he's a guy, right? guys CAN'T admit they like some one....at least, not guys as stubborn as Inu-Yasha. i think i'm done now, have i talked enough?? toodles!
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