| "The New Student and Kagome's Secret" Reviews/Comments [ 1030 ] |
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Reviewed By: sesshy_my_sex_god [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2003 15:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked the peice. I just finished. One problem I found was the fact that you seem to use the phrase "he's never been so open with me before" or something really close to that way too often. It seems every other minute you're using it and after a while it seems to lose it's meaning. But over all I like the story. Keep up the fic I like it -sesshy my sex god
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Reviewed By: BabayBunny [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2003 15:56 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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...*looks at u* Im not going to say anything bacause i know you would rather inu live then kouga...*glares* How could you end it there!!!*falls on floor with anime tear* PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SO I CAN SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!
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Reviewed By: Relix On: December 09, 2003 15:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep Writing! I LOVE YOU!!!
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Title: AWWWW!!!!
Reviewed By: Sume On: December 09, 2003 14:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWWWWW!!!!!!! GO INUYASHA! Yea boy you fight for your Kagome! Awwww, that chapter was sooo sweet and soo good with such an evil cliffy! But that's okay! And I even downloaded Kagome and Inuyasha's song, and played it while I was reading, your right....it gives it such a good mood! It's like....dun dun dun...who will win Kagome?! Dun dun dun!!!!!! OMG! I love this story! Please update whenever you get a chance! Sume
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Reviewed By: Esther Tan On: December 09, 2003 08:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Argh!!!! That Kouga !! So dense!!! I gotta kick his butt. Go Inuyasha kick his butt to the moon!!. If I have a Kouga doll I'll stick pins into it & watch him squirm. Quick next chapter I want Inuyasha to win and Inu & Kag to be together again.Why why must U be so mean (howl out loud). Great story man!!! See even got my emotion to feel the intense anger against Kouga. Please update quick quick.
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko(Not signed in) On: December 09, 2003 07:54 CST
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w00t! for the first time when somebody said "play [insert song]" i actually had it!!! =D oh man kagome's spazin' out! DOH!!!! DONT LET INUYASHA DIE, DO U HEAR ME!?!?!!?!?!?!
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Reviewed By: Priestess Kylie-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2003 23:39 CST
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Reviewed By: Katina108 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2003 21:44 CST
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Really great chapter! I think it's your best chapter by far!! I can't wait to see what happens! Does school end this week for you too? I hope it does! That means more updates!
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Reviewed By: IWantMoreIY On: December 08, 2003 21:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry the scale only goes up to 10 of 10. I would really rather give a 15 or 16 of 10, but oh well. The spelling thing is just for "in do time, in do time"(should be due) in a pervious chapter(I don't remeber which and I don't care). I LOVE THIS STORY. Lately I can't get enough Inuyasha and this has done wonders for my hunger. Please write more! I love how you have managed to keep the major players having essentially similar interactions while keeping it all plausible! But some things need to be done: *throws small tomato at author for the cliffhangers and intentionally misses because its just too darn good a story* I don't know if I'll ever be able to read another less-than-excellent fanfic again, but I'll forgive you if you keep writing... keep up the superlative work!
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Reviewed By: Kaye [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2003 21:04 CST
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What was that you were saying about evil cliffhangers? I think this takes the freaking cake! You must write more soon, please. Keep it up! It's excellent, and don't let either of them die, and if one must die let it be Kouga. I love him but killing Inuyasha would not be cool.
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Reviewed By: Inu_Kag_4ever On: December 08, 2003 19:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz plz plz update soon! i realy really really want to read the battle between inuyasha and kouga! oh, and what the heck did inuyasha say to myouga?!
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Reviewed By: EarthSoul_929 On: December 08, 2003 19:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story, but, damn the cliffhanger!! i cant wait to see some action!
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Reviewed By: Kitsune Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2003 18:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was expecting a battle between Inuyasha and Kouga but not in that form. I can't believe how good this fic is written. I mean i tried to think of a possible ending but nothing came up as good as your own. I love your fic and i hope you keep writing more challenges along the way for Kag and Inu.
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Title: wow...
Reviewed By: WatreGoddess9(author) On: December 08, 2003 18:15 CST
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wow! so cool.. omg, u g2 update! plz! plz! i love ur fic, omg, this is some good stuff, man, ur talented.. ok, i g2g, but keep up the good work! byez!
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2003 17:15 CST
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WAHAHAHAHAHAHA YES ACTION!! I LOVE ACTION!!! (If you suck at battle scenes that's okay I can just picture it! ^_~) The plot thickens! I like your point of view on how if you make them too different from the anime/manga they aren't that good. I have seen a lot of good OOC's though. :)
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