| "Ryou's Fiancee" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: Gate Dragon On: September 03, 2003 10:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
If this is your first fic good job... if not it is total crap.
If English is not your native language then you tried your best... if it is then GET PREREADERS BEFORE YOUR BAD GRAMMER CAUSES SEIZUES!
If you were trying for creativity then you faild miserably regaurdless, except in the area of original premiss.
But... I have enjoyed it mostly, so it wasn't all that bad.
All in all not something I'm going to be looking for future chapters on.
Try harder next fic. |
Reviewed By: Kitiara On: August 21, 2003 12:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is so kewl! Do another chapie pwease! |
Reviewed By: shitsumon On: August 21, 2003 17:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the first time I've read a Yugioh & Ranma 1/2 fic, and I hope to read more soon! |
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