| "I Didn't Know I Was Waiting For You" Reviews/Comments [ 79 ] |
| Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Ruia Motou On: October 06, 2003 20:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is really good! keep going and update soon. inu-chan is sooo evil, plotting to torture his future parents. p.s. are you going to write a sequel?
|
Reviewed By: NightChild01 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2003 04:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very, very good story. High marks in everything. I'm greatly enjoying reading this and can't wait for the next chapter. This story is very differnt than a lot of others that I've read and I greatly enjoy it. (I haven't figured out how to make paragaph endents appear yet...x.X) Keep up the good work. ~ NC01
|
Title: Happy now!
Reviewed By: caliko(not signed it) On: October 03, 2003 08:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
hehehehehhehe... Yasha-baby is a stinker... imagine.. PLANNING on torturing his future parents! Gotta love that sweety, tho! Hurry, please, with the next chappy! ^_^
|
Reviewed By: Del_kaidin [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2003 21:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'd give you an 11 but... I love this... and Kagome and Sesshomaru are going to be the parents of Inuyasha's reincarnation... wonderful!! I hope Kagura's soul can be their daughter...
|
Reviewed By: Julie 1 On: September 15, 2003 14:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just discovered you're story and I just loved it! It's got a great sense of humor and fun as well as romance and action. I think you did an excellent job blending the two aspects together. Kagome and Sesshoumaru make a wonderful couple in this. I also really like how you treat Inuyasha and Kikyou. I really hope you continue with the story. It's very entertaining. More lemons are always a good thing. You did an excellent job in that department. The last scene at the festival was just fabulous.
Please post more soon!
PS... You're spelling's not all that bad (believe me I've seen MUCH MUCH worse), I just a one little thing I've gotta point out. (It's repeated a few times). Human in Japanese is spelled ningen. I don't know if it's a typo or just not knowing how to spell, but niggen just looks to much like a not so nice English word. (I hope that didn't sound snotty...I just wanted to be helpful! ^__^ ) |
Reviewed By: Michi-Chan6 On: September 12, 2003 22:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
I started reading this fic on ff.net but I lost track of it when I went out of town and I was so sad. Now I found it again and am very happy. Keep up the good work. I love this fic. |
Reviewed By: Aira^o^ On: September 11, 2003 05:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awww after the long wait! and it all wort it too!! I could never foreseen Kagome's death (well almost anyway) And oh.. so good too!! |
Reviewed By: Phoebemoon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2003 18:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
she cant die .. and neither sesshi !! They need to stay together and have babies !! *sniff* I dont wanna cry lots |
Reviewed By: Sesshoumaru_Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2003 09:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice writing! Update soon |
Reviewed By: AutumnFire [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2003 17:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just had to let you know--before I go to the next chapter, that I cried, CRIED while reading this. While I normally hate Kikyou, I do enjoy seeing authors give another dimension to her character and her actions. I also like how you've given IY a softer edge in his choosing Kikyou. I truly believe that he never wants to hurt Kagome, but that he must be true to the conflict raging in his heart.
You've done a fabulous job! The "conversation" between dream-Kikyou and dream-Kagome is wonderful and obviously well thought-out. I'm definitely recommending your fic to others who will appreciate the high quality of your writing style and the deep philosophical thoughts of your story. Please keep up the good work!
Sincerely,
AutumnFire (AutumnFire1414@yahoo.com) |
Reviewed By: bearjamas [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2003 08:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
I ususally wait until I read an entire story before I review but since you begged, and I think your story is wonderful so far...
You have done an excellant job demonstrating the different loves kagome has for inuyasha, fluffy-chan, and hojo. As well, as explaining to the reader this spectrum of love that can coexist. Making kagome's simultaneous love for the brothers (and hojo) believable. Bravo! Many stories I have read lack this kind of development and attention to detail. |
Reviewed By: MiangelisaKuroTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2003 21:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ UPDATE UPDATE!! UP-DA-TE!!! i fully agree with sundragon!!! i love ur work and u should update it as soon as possible!!! great story! great *giggles* lemon! after ur lemon one can get destrubing yet pleasant dreams about everyone's fav. YOKAI Fluffy^^ (*love tat nickname*)
well anyways!! plz keep writing!!! and i hope there will be more lemon in da future! i mean they DO have to concieve and heir to the throne! i hope it will be a gurl and a boy (just a suggestion)
anyways...PLZ KEEP ON WRITIGN!!!
~Lilith |
Reviewed By: Sundragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2003 13:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh, forgot to say something. That was your first lemon? It was great! Ja Ne. Again. |
Reviewed By: Sundragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2003 13:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT! I think it is great! Just update it soon, and are you going to do a sequel? Please! Update!Update!Update!Update!Update!Update!Update!Update!Update!Update!Update!Update!Update!Update!Update!Update!Update!Update!Update!Update!Update!Update!Update!Update!Update!Update!Update! I think you get the idea.
Ja Ne |
Reviewed By: MiangelisaKuroTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2003 03:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
its an amazing ficy!! plz keep on writing!! (ill add more of comments later^^ gotta go to sleep^^)
GREAT STORY! |
| Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 ] |
