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Title: GAAAH!
Reviewed By: shake_it_buddy On: October 01, 2003 09:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is awsome! This is the first fic I've enjoyed reading for quite a while, you're fabulous! ^____^ Please continue before I die of lack-of-chapter-9!
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Reviewed By: Akot On: September 29, 2003 19:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very, very fun story. Your characterizations are great, and its nice to see some detail added Tatsuha, and some of the other more minor characters, especially Ryuuichi. I love that you've given him a real brain in there: most people tend to write him at face value. It's nice to see some really good Gravi fic, and please be warned that I may pull a K on you if you don't actually finish this...
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Reviewed By: Youkai Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2003 08:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! No words can begin to do justice to this story because it is above and beyond anything that I have read in a long time. I am a total Tatsuha/Ryuuichi fan, and I love the favt that this sotry is written from Tatsuha's POV. Please update ASAP because I want to know what is going to happen next. There are no suggestions that I can make because this story is perfect, and needs no corrections.
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Title: love the story
Reviewed By: z On: September 19, 2003 19:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE this story!!!! It's the best Ryuichi Tatsuha fic out there! When are you gonna update? SOON SOON SOON!!!! |
Title: On the Outside
Reviewed By: Blaine On: September 12, 2003 12:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this is an absolutely fantastic fic. It's the best gravitation fic I've read for a loooong time, and I've been reading for them for an incredible amount of time.
I love the first person of tatsuha. The 'brooding' average teenager you've portrayed his is no less than brilliant. Most people just make him a crazed fan boy .. which he is, but nothing else. Where as here, he has substance as well as the crazed fanboyness. I love it. =) everyone elses character is really on the money too. Shuuichi and Yuki are adorable. Mika is great! Please keep goin with this. I'll loyally follow this story. |
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