| "unforgivable..." Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: debbie the rex On: September 14, 2003 13:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good keep going. |
Reviewed By: Sundragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2003 09:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wirte More! I think it is off to a great start. |
Reviewed By: waterrain [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2003 08:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLease write more chapters *puppy dog eyes* please oh please please please please please please please. |
Reviewed By: Hugothegreat On: September 14, 2003 06:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more more more I love it I love it.UPDATE |
Reviewed By: update On: September 14, 2003 06:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its really really good. Please update more. |
Reviewed By: dfjknjkfd On: September 14, 2003 06:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sounds interesting |
Reviewed By: Hell's lil Bitch On: September 14, 2003 03:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you need to write more but its realy good so far!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: classified On: September 14, 2003 01:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
cool story
i know you
someone wrote about you in their story
neat i get to read one of yours
your story is intresting but you should make the chapters longer |
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