| "Sarie Mue" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: akito_sweet_insanity [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2008 01:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my goodness! The whole thing was so clever and funny! And the chapter I've really been looking forward to is coming up next! Please do write the chapter with Vegeta. If you get tired of writing the story, please at least finish the part with Vegeta. I've been dying to see how he would handle the self-indulgent "Sarie Mue". :D
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Reviewed By: SSJ6Tigger [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2005 14:07 CST
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*grins sheepishly* heh heh heh. Sorry
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Title: Woooo hooooo!!!
Reviewed By: SSJ6Tigger [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2005 14:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa. This fic FUCKING ROCKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sorry. Gotta hate the Mary sue stories out there, tho some are ok. He he...Sarie Mue...brilliant. Your fic is fantastic, it's actually funny!! The part about ending up in the middle of a desert...brill. Tho most people spell desert rong, so it ends up as dessert. rrriiiggghhhhtt...Lol, loving the Monty Python puns (wink wink nudge nudge say no more). I assume they're Monty Python. :s. Ack! You included the 'meaningful look' somewhere in this fic…THAT ANNOYS ME!! WHAT THE HECK IS A MEANINGFUL LOOK??? Sorry. Ooooooo, cell's next. Wonder what will happen this time…mwhahahahahahahahahahahaha *ahem* Keep up the good work! UPDATE SOON! NOW!!!!!!! Oh, may I suggest putting this up on FF.Net if you haven't already? No? Ok, I'll shut up ^-^. UPDATE!!!!! He he, Trunks is gay...and Mr Satan...mwhahahahahahahahahaha
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Reviewed By: Majin Kade [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2004 23:11 CST
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OH MY &%�@&* GAWD! FRIEZA? That is so perfect! Can't wait to read that one! Update soon! Oh and I thought that long speech Popo made was friggin' hysterical!
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Reviewed By: Majin Kade [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2004 22:56 CST
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"I was like Blue Gender, Titanic, and the death of Mufasa all rolled into one" **dies laughing**
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Title: Cruel, but fair.
Reviewed By: nice-day [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2004 16:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is thoroughly enjoyable so far. I've only read chapter one, but your light, readable style and wicked satire will bring me back. As the title says, your comment is cruel, but fair, with respect to the cliches of both fan fiction and anime. And as for your insinuations about Trunks' private life... brave, or foolhardy? Who can say? One other thing. Just to explain why there's only a 9/10 for originality - that's because your story is a parody. Though, it is an excellent parody. Guess there's no win in that department. All in all, excellent work.
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Title: viva le resistance
Reviewed By: Silentchylde [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2003 15:57 CST
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They got Perdo! Yay! Go Chi Chi! I can't believe Rene wouldn't do the opening. It couldn't be from self doubt. Socrates might have done it if a couple of Wyld Stallyns rung him up. Or sent Rufus after him. Nietzsche and Richard Strauss in a copyright war? Tisk. 'Also Sprach Zarathustra' was a good read. Very influential. Thoreau ... blah. Watterson could have just sent Hobbes to do the opening. 'Calvin and Hobbes' is great. The story itself was very funny. The Kaioshin/Kibito relationship was -um- interesting. Disturbing yet interesting. I can't say I blame Saire in choosing death over a pink, Billy Ray Cyrus looking :cough: Mahjong partner. Y'all have plans for Vegeta? Why am I suddenly concerned for his well being... . Oh, loved the line from Quantum Leap. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Majin_Kade On: October 29, 2003 09:50 CST
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Another hilarious chapter, I loved how Kibito was constantly being bitch-slapped and all. "Who's your daddy?" LOL! OMG and then at the end he was talking to himself, that was great! Another failed romance for Sarie Mue, ha ha ha ha! I can't wait to read about Tien, that'll be awesome!
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Reviewed By: Silentchylde [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2003 16:28 CDT
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Ahh...17 doing the Saturday Night Fever strut scene. Much thanks for not wrapping him in that awful leisure suit. Vegeta could have done the Polyester Prince look easily though :snickers:. I was surprised to read 17 had tried Venezuelan Beaver Cheese. I thought the cheese shop owner in that Python sketch was shot dead by an irate customer. Must have reopened under new management ^_^. As always, wounderfully done.
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Reviewed By: Majin_Kade On: October 22, 2003 11:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LMAO! I love this fic! "MahJong", HA HA HA, TOO FUNNY! More FUNimation bashing, and the Buddy Lee jeans, lol! "I think I should probably kill you." That line was hilarious! You guys are comic geniuses, this is so awesome! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Title: LOL
Reviewed By: HCV On: October 09, 2003 17:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great. I hope you do more of the guys. I especially like that someone agrees that Goku would more likely than not be a lousy lover. Hey, ChiChi wouldn't know any better either.
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Reviewed By: Silentchylde [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2003 19:05 CDT
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Oh my god, they killed Krillen! Wait a minute...the universe was reset. All's right in the world then. ^_^ I loved the nod to 'From Here to Eternity'. What a great movie. It even had ::sighs:: Frankie. Could he ever sing. And next on the plate, Krillin's own dear future brother in law. Absorption by Cell will look good when the Great Will of the Cosmos is finnished with him. Loving it ^_^ I don't know about anyone else but I'm waiting to see if there is going to be a Sarie/teen Gohan pair up. Who better to listen to those cheesy speeches -or worse yet that rap- of ::pose:: ::pose:: The Great Saiyaman ::pose:: ::pose:: Write on, authors.
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Reviewed By: Majin Kade [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2003 15:48 CDT
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Ha ha ha ha ha OMG you guys, that is just the greatest fanfic! It was so hilarious every time you bashed Funimation for censoring stupid things, and the concept of Sarie Mue is just priceless! LMAO, awesome story! Please update soon, I'm adding this to my favorites list! ...Still LMAO!
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Reviewed By: Silentchylde [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2003 20:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is ever so delightfully written! I was literally laughing out loud at Sarie's encounters. With Krillen coming up to bat, I almost feel sorry for her. Almost. A rather fitting punishment to any who take dabbling in water colors too seriously. ^_^ Having Shather opening the second chapter was classic. Heres hoping his combat skills are still up to snuff. With his 'prize', he'll need them.
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2003 12:49 CDT
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wow. ur fic rox!!! i think she shud ennd up wiv pickcollo then thay culd haev babees !! rite moer pls!!!!!!!!!!! *Eyes above review* - after the amount of reviews I've seen in this vein, you'd've thought I would be better at them... *Sigh* I'm looking forward to the chapters where she displays her beautiful singing voice and concert pianist standard keyboard skills. I do hope that she is MUCH stronger than Goku too... :D (And that not one silken lock of her flowing, glossy hair is out of place after she has to save all of our beloved senshi from a terrible fate)
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