| "Hate Lives in Love" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: horsesrocketh [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2007 15:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
continue continue continue!!!!!
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Reviewed By: sinistre_ange [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2007 19:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love your story its so funny. Please keep going and if you can make the chapters a little bit longer that would be great.
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Title: BTW
Reviewed By: kakashifangirl_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2007 15:42 CST
Comment/Review:
By the way, saying 'bye' in italian is spelled 'chou', just to tell ya'
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Reviewed By: kakashifangirl_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2007 15:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hola, see? Told I would review again ^^ okay, your chapters got a little longer I saw and I read the whole thing over. The storyline is very good, but I think you should get a beta (or spellcheck, whatever you want to call it), there are a lot of random parts that make the story a little confusing, but i still like it. This isn't a flame, never have I flamed anybody because i think it juts takes time to write a good story; this one will grow, you just need to concentrate on some of the details of the characters...but otherwise, cool story!
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Reviewed By: drummer_19 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2007 16:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well...I can say that now my enjoyment of this chapter just went up...like a lot. I can't wait to keep reading..hope it will be just as interesting (or more)...but still try to make the capters a bit longer, cause they're still kinda short. Anyways..very good!
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Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: horsesrocketh [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2007 22:47 CST
Comment/Review:
love it! absolutly love it! youve gotta continue. the grammar was off a bit but otherwise it was awesome. it has an awesome plat...and stuff.....YAY! continue!!! or ill shall....be mad i guess......yeah....bye horsesrocketh signing out
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: drummer_19 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 15:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's good, but the chapters need to be longer cause if their so short the readers start to lose interest in the story. Other that that I think that it's good so far, oh also in some of the chapters it was hard to follow along, still it has a good story plot...and is getting interesting. And i agree with the other reviewer...FINALLY SOMEONE THAT DOESN'T HAVE A WAKKED OUT MIND AND MAKES KAI GAY!!!!I mean wats with that??...why do a lot of people make him gay??...it makes no sence at all.
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Title: too funny
Reviewed By: LadyAmazon14 On: January 18, 2007 19:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh,man! this is the most hailarious story i ever read! no ever did kai with a crazy brother. this story will forever be in my favorites so don't you dare delete it! just wondering about three things... does tyson have a thing for ally? when is the romance for ally and kai come in? plese don't air mariah with ray.
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Title: Yo
Reviewed By: kakashifangirl_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2006 22:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't listen to the dork who reviewed before *growls at him* I thought you are doing very well, your grammar was a little off and there could be a little more detail, but your storyline is very good and should be continued! I agree the chapters should be longer, but that's only cuz I like it so much and wish there was more to read! I hope your story is continued, because I know you like it, even if only a little, since you didn't delete it; so please continue and I will review again. ~kakashifangirl_13~
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Reviewed By: Kendricks Alashane [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2003 22:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok i went threw and read it all. Im sorry to say i dont like it much. I think you should take my advice from the other review. ALso to add to it make the chapters longer. The are way to short. I know all i am saying is bad stuff about. But I like at it this way. It could be so much better. ~Kendricks Alashane~
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Reviewed By: Kendricks Alashane [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2003 22:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Comment/Review:
It was ok but I think you could have done mush better. For one stop (Putting things like this in) Try to make it a little better. I mean it was ok. But I think it a little chesses. Livin it up some try to get more reader. Im not tring to say this to be mean. But you need to work at it a little more. I want even able to get past the first chapter. And from the story line it sounded so go. Your also one of the few I know that didn't pair Kai up with a guy. I mean half of the people out there are wrong in the head and make them gay! So please try to make it a little better and I go read the rest and try to give it a chance ok. Outtie ~Kendricks ALashane~ Ps i didnt give a rating over all because im going to read the rest first. then I come back and write a new review. No hard feelings I hope.
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