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Title: A little bigger than you expected....?
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: October 06, 2008 16:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I dident enjoy this fic as much as the 1st but not because your a bad author. The fic just seemed to have a bigger plot than I belive you had orignally intanded, there were alot of lose ends such as: 1)Does Dou's group of friends ever except Trowa and his intentions tword Quarte? 2)What happened to Solo? 3)You mentioned that Heero was missing too, but never mentioned where he was. I think that about covers it on the 'loose ends' tid bit. Im not pointing all this out to be mean or anything, its just that the story left me with these questions in mind and im only saying all this so theres a chance for improvment. Overall it was very well written and I enjoyed myself, though from the summery I thought the focuse of this story was Duo's growing feelings for Heero, but in the end they where only hinted at and a bit blurred out by the rest of the story. It felt like the plot overwellmed the main poin of the story and the feelings at the end seemed rushed. I feel like im making this out to be a bad review but really I guess its just me trying to express my feelings as the reader. Constructive critisism? Don't get me wrong I did love and enjoy this fic and expeshally the one before it! Without further 'critisism', constructive or not, I would like to thank you for posting and sharing your story. I am happily looking forward to any future works, so until the, Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni On: April 12, 2005 00:00 CDT
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So, I want to know where this is going... I like the storyline so far, just not the horrid cliffhangers...
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Reviewed By: OtakuNi On: April 09, 2005 20:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your writing!!! I enjoyed this one so far and am really looking forward to what happened next! (I want to see how everything plays out... oooo I can't wait!!! PLEASE HURRY AND UPDATE!!! PLEASE!!!!!) >^.^
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Reviewed By: fujinakaheero NTS On: April 06, 2005 16:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woo-HOo!!!! New chapter, yay! So you're going to be done this story soon, will you be writing another sequel to this or you gonna be done this series? Great story btw, so I hope that all things in this story turns out well in the end ^.^ I can't remember if I've reviewed this story or not... I think I did, gomen if I didn't. But I'm reviewing now so I hope you liked it. Anyways, Ja Ne! Fujinakaheero (not signed in)
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Reviewed By: Foxy Grampa On: April 06, 2005 15:32 CDT
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Make a new chapter soon o_o PLease... ;-;
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Reviewed By: Kirby99 On: March 01, 2005 15:13 CST
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Now I'm curious as hell! Please continue with this story as soon as you can!
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Reviewed By: fujinakaheero (not signed in) On: February 13, 2005 13:18 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally!!! New chappie! *glees* I was waiting for this story to be updated for quite a while than I forgot about it and than when I decided to see the updated stories today, there this story was right ontop of the list.. I hope you update alittle faster on your next chapter 'cause I now want to know what will happen between Quatre, Trowa and Duo.
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Title: Cool
Reviewed By: Sivy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 02:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it lots, hopefull you will update it, I would hate to see a story unfinished.
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Reviewed By: AB On: September 17, 2004 19:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello! I just want to tell you that I think this story is really great. I believe that you've been able to express Duo's feelings very well. I have no idea why this story has't had as many reviews asthe first one, but I expect that you continue with this great story. By the way, you were too cruel, I was really excited about the kissing thing. Please, don't wait too much to update the story.
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Reviewed By: darkdragon91 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2004 02:17 CDT
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omg plz update!! it rox i luv it!! keep going!! lol well g2g by by
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Reviewed By: Rw On: August 21, 2004 22:36 CDT
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Pretty good so far. You do need a spellchecker though.
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Reviewed By: Noviah On: January 15, 2004 14:36 CST
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Review = update, so update! In case I'm too vague, I enjoyed your fic immenseley and am hoping for more!! Please?
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Reviewed By: coregium On: January 09, 2004 21:58 CST
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oh oh oh oh oh! write more! i'm an impatient person...just to let you know. really awesome story. Absolutely loved it!
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Reviewed By: coregium On: January 06, 2004 18:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fanfic..please write more...I want to know what happens!
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Title: Ch 1-4
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2003 10:37 CST
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I like the very very slow progression of Heero and Duo's relationship. Duo has only had one little instance of a fleeting attraction to Heero, and it actually is quite believable that way. As for his desire to spend time with Heero, well, that works on more than one level. I actually thought it was rather...prophetic, perhaps, that Heero quoted an excerpt from the love letter Duo wrote as a joke on Wufei. It was a good way to start off the sequel. I actually thought that Trowa, of all people, might have been the one to let Duo know what the dress code for the Christmas dinner would be. His questioning Duo about whether Solo was his boyfriend was a good way to introduce his casual acceptance of same-sex relationships - and perhaps enough to plant the seed in Duo's mind for later. I know that it remains to be seen, but I would like to see him end up with Quatre in the end, now that he has time to see people for who they are inside instead of what they have in the bank. Especially after that little incident in the prequel where he made a big stink of Duo's picking Quatre for the team. What else? I am, of course, curious as to the cause of Heero's black eye, and I wonder about his dislike of Christmas and what brought him to the orphanage from Japan. There is a lot of potential in this story. You don't have to respond or answer anything...I am not expecting you to tell me anything since I will see things as they unfold in the story.
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