| "Of Youkai Bondage" Reviews/Comments [ 43 ] |
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2003 23:12 CDT
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I just spent the last couple of hours reading fromv the beginging to Ch 9, and all I can think is 'Wow.' This story is sad but at the same time it has happy moments which seem to overshadow the bad ones. (Well maybe not completely. But that is why I like it.) Your writing stlye is much different from what I'm used to reading and I love it! Now to comment on the story. Kagome is going to kill Kikyo when she finds out what she did to Ayame. (Who owns her anyway?) And it will tear her up when Ayame tells her the whole story. Wonder what Kikyo really makes them do? Small cuts. Does she get "off" on others pain? Hmm. Dumb question. But is that painful foreplay going to mess up performance? (Don't mind me I have an over active imagination.) I thought the InuYasha-Kagome moment was so sweet. I think it was a very mature sacrifice (it that spelled right?) on her part to want to sell him so not to take advantage of him. But did she honestly think it would be better for him? If he had been returned five times and about to be 'destoryed' who would want to buy him? He'd end back up where he started. I am still curious about when Kikyo bought him. I can understand Kagome not seeing him if Koga is just leaving the room after three weeks but still...sounds fishy to me. I'm still waiting for the protection part to come in. You wouldn't have wrote it if it wasn't important. Darn. I wrote to much again. Sorry I tend to get wrapped up in my own musing and so how it appears on the screen. Be looking for your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Kanari no Kage [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2003 17:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Eeeeee, this is definitely good stuff, and I don't even like Kouga! You made him cool! ^__________^ I also love your fast chapter writing to no end. You will update as soon as possible, won't you?
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: lysel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2003 11:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLease wrire more
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Reviewed By: Ehioze On: October 17, 2003 08:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please Please Please write more! This story is very original and intersting. P.S. I don't like Kikyo either!
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Reviewed By: Kanari no Kage [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2003 02:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOR EMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORE! Amber: Perhaps she gets the point, kaasan? You think? Amber: ^_^ Un! ....all right, I guess so ^_^; okay, so anyways, UPDATE! NOW! ... .......Onegai? ^_^;
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Reviewed By: Aurora_thorn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2003 00:19 CDT
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O.O Wow... that was quick. I asked for a quick update and here it is. Cool... maybe it'll work again, UPDATE!!!!! (A couple hours later) Damn it didn't work! UPDATE ANYWAY!!!!
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Reviewed By: Missteya [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2003 22:29 CDT
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why can't i see my own gosh darn reviews?
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Reviewed By: ME On: October 16, 2003 22:14 CDT
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I'm enjoying your fic so far, always love Inu-Kag stories ^_^ update soon!
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Reviewed By: Aurora_thorn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2003 20:45 CDT
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I really like this story and want you to write more!!! What are you waiting for? WRITE THE REST OF THIS FIC. UPDATE!!!!!!!!!! ... please?
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Reviewed By: Queen Klu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2003 18:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like it! Love it! Write more! Please please please have a happy ending!
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Reviewed By: Sirene On: October 16, 2003 15:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Only 3 reviews! You deserve alot mor then that! This fic is awsome! You should have 100 reviews. Ill come back 97 times and review if i have to! Please update so i can read more. See ya next time
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Reviewed By: meera [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2003 15:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
write more
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Reviewed By: Miko_Snow Godess_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2003 02:25 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this story, Keep up the good work. The chapters are a lil short but it's all good. Keep up the good work, and update soon. :)
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Reviewed By: Del_kaidin (Nope still not signing in...) On: October 15, 2003 23:49 CDT
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Good... chapters are a bit short... but other wise good....
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Reviewed By: Del_Kaidin (Nope Not Doing It) On: October 15, 2003 21:53 CDT
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Good start... I'd like the chapters a bit longer... but that's no big. Will be looking forward to the next instalment.
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