| "Two Swords: The Tangled Web" Reviews/Comments [ 76 ] |
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Reviewed By: I will not give my name On: February 23, 2004 22:06 CST
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This is so sad. I loved it. It has a wonderful ending. ( cring in the background )
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Reviewed By: Fangirl5 On: January 17, 2004 01:34 CST
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I enjoyed your story, that I did. Probably the best crossover for these two anime that I have read.
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Reviewed By: pyro12 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2004 20:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it, good fight seens, good ending.
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Title: please
Reviewed By: MashiroInu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2003 13:05 CST
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for more info and/or pics to go to the attacks, email me andreak@austin.rr.com
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Title: Attacks:Kenshin
Reviewed By: MashiroInu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2003 12:59 CST
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Kenshin says Hiten Mitsurugi Ryu then states the name of the attack. I have made a list of his attacks for your viewing pleasure: Ku-Zu-Ryu-Sen (nine headed dragon flash) This technique was created when trying to achieve the final goal of the succession technique. In any kind of kenjutsu, there are nine main points of attack/defense. Some of these include the head, the two shoulders, the chest, between the legs etc. etc. The technique of Kuzu Ryu Sen is used to attack ALL of these points. Only a handful (Soujirou and Enishi spring to mind) are able to block or dodge them as the nine blows are delivered at the same time. Not only is Shinshoku essential, but the power behind each of the nine blows could also be a cause for defeat Ryu-Shou-Sen (rising dragon flash) The user places his sword in a horizontal fashion over his head, and attacks upwards (usually towards the enemy's neck). This, coupled with the usually downward charge of the enemy creates a large impact, greater then a normal sword stroke. First seen when Kenshin defeats Senkaku, and later seen again during the fight against Shishio. Ryu-Tsui-Sen (dragon mallet flash) Many fighters have weaknesses from the air. The swordsman takes advantage of this by attacking from above, first by leaping up to gain height, and then using the force of their weight and gravity to land a heavy blow usually either on the head or shoulders. Few can withstand such a technique. Ryu-Tsui-Sen-Zan (Zan=to cut) A variation of the Ryu Tsui Sen, where the sword is held pointing directly downwards, meant to severe directly through an opponent's head. Do-Ryu-Sen (ground dragon flash) This move involves the ground, where Kenshin's sword is the stimulus in creating a force that will uproot the ground and attack the enemy. The two variations seem is where it acts like the Futae no Kiwami projected across the floor or where hitting the ground sends rocks flying towards the enemy. Do Ryu Sen is most useful for out of range enemies, or those who tend to use distance attacks. First seen in the fight between Kenshin and Raijuta. Sou-Ryu-Sen (paired dragon flash) A Nidan Battou Jutsu technique, this maximises the use of Kenshin's sakabatou. Because of the reversed blade, his speed with any Battou Jutsu is slower then it would be were he using a real katana. The katana flashes out at an incredible speed (like any normal Battou Jutsu), but should this be evaded or blocked, Kenshin then uses his sheathe to land another blow. This is first seen in Kenshin's fight against Udo Jine. Ryu-Kan-Sen (dragon wind upwards flash) Used when the swordsmaster is quite close to a person. This technique (better used as a counter-attack rather then an offensive move) is used to deliver a backhanded blow as the swordsmaster spins around. Seen against Katanagari no Cho. Ryu-Kan-Sen-Arashi (Arashi=storm) The swordsman curls himself into a ball, and spinning completely with sword extended. (Seen against Shishio Makoto) Ryu-Kan-Sen-Kogarashi (Kogarashi=tree blast) This is a more powerful, and a more advanced version of the original Ryu Kan Sen technique. Again first seen against Shishio Makoto. Sou-Ryu-Sen-Tsumuji Another enhanced variation of Ryu Kan Sen. This starts with an extremely fast lunge at the enemy, avoiding his/her sword (most likely at a horizontal alignment because of the speed), and hitting the opponent around the midsection. Shinshoku (God-speed) is essential for this technique, but because of the position and speed, landing is difficult. Ryu-Sou-Sen (double dragon flash) Randomly attacking different vital parts of the enemy at extremely high speed, not allowing the enemy time to recover from any single hit, or block. Used for those who have a lot of stamina and cannot be defeated from a single blow. Kenshin first used this against Sagara Sanosuke, during their second fight. Ryu-Sou-Sen-Garami As the name suggests, this is a variation of Ryu Sou Sen, where the blows are directed at the neck and/or head.
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Title: just some sugestions
Reviewed By: MashiroInu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2003 12:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked your story, Inuyasha and Rurouni Kenshin are my favorite animes in the whole world. I write some fanfictions in my spare time but I can never finish them...*sob* I promised myself that I will finish a story before I post it on any website, so that when life rears its ugly head I won't leave any sad readers behind. But that strategy won't work if I can never finish anything ne? Anyways, time to explain my ratings! I liked your style of writing but sometimes it gets hard to follow... A 9! Your spelling wasn't all that great, especially when it came to attacks... A 8! You spent alot of time on its originality,you have a very creative mind... A 10! As I have already stated my pleasure of reading your piece... A 10! This was one of the best fanfictions I've read... A 10!
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Reviewed By: Ookami Samurai [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2003 14:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Impresive, creative, beyond words.
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Reviewed By: lunachan On: November 28, 2003 10:37 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAWWWW!! That was so good!!! I really liked it!!
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Title: Two Swords: The Tangled Web
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2003 13:18 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG...that was WONDERFUL...I loved it...oh man and geez IT was GREAT....I loved the Ending:D...THANKS:D
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Reviewed By: cuff On: November 19, 2003 03:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
how very creative in your deducing how to get the pairings and the demise of the shikon no tama to do what was needed and no more......your leading up to the finaly and how you knit it all together was riviting and i must say from all the anime i have read was very entertaining.......keep up the writing.........
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Title: lo!
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2003 23:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heya! WOW!!! GOOD JOB! wow...i was confoosed at first well-still am, but, i think i got the gist of it! oh my...*sniff* that was a pretty sad ending...but good none the less! im so glad with the way this fic turned out! im trying to think of the next chapter for mine, but...erg! wellz, newayz, good job hun! REALLY LOVE this fic lots, and i hope you make another story wen u gots da time! -Lani
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Title: Wow!!!!
Reviewed By: jschu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2003 20:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was the best crossover story I've ever had the pleasure of reading. And how you tied up the loose ends w/ Sano & Sango and their son was original, or a least I think so. Again great job and I look forward to reading more of your stories. jschu25
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Reviewed By: HMPrune [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2003 18:24 CST
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You have written a truly beautiful and touching story - thanks!
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Reviewed By: Fox Warrior Ed [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2003 17:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MY GOD THAT WAS GOOD! I loved every minuet of that fic! It was-words can't describe how great that was. You're amazing!
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Title: very good
Reviewed By: slave2anime On: November 14, 2003 19:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm so sad... so so so sad... the story ended..T.T.... very*sniff* good story... (this is animelove, but i'm too lazy to log in)
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