| "Broken Spirit" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: PJ On: November 23, 2003 13:47 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow!!! you killed Hojo..... he is kind of irritating sometimes but I never thought he was the one. This should get interesting I know Inu is going to try to prove his love but Kagome is going to do everything in her power to keep him from loving her including probably doing/saying some very hurtful things I just hope Inuyasha doesn't give up on her. I hope his stubbornness holds out and he can get through to her. Post more soon please this is good. Psst: *whispering* make the chapters longer *just kidding*
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Reviewed By: Kym On: November 22, 2003 22:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im really sorry about your friend. i know how it feels.One of my best friends died in a car crash too. I really like your story! Please continue!!
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover *im a mediaminer member, just not signed in yet.* On: November 12, 2003 18:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHO IS HE??????!!!!!!! I GOTTA FIND OUT! Sorry, I get like that sumtimes. But update soon, I wanna find out who HE is!
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Reviewed By: meera [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2003 18:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pls continue
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Reviewed By: Kylinn On: November 02, 2003 12:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a wonderful tribute to your friend! It's a great story beginning. Good suspense factor, one can't help but wonder who it is. Can't wait for you to update.
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Reviewed By: Vic_18 On: November 02, 2003 11:44 CST
Comment/Review:
hey sorry about your friend.I really like the story though, im really curious who the friend could be. i like it UPDATE SOON plz
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