| "Trials and Tribulations" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Title: Bloody Hell!!!
Reviewed By: Echan2 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 20:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You NEVER cease to amaze me, darlin'. everything you write is immediate gold and it's so intresting to read and get enraptured by it. *sigh* Poor Sora though... what made you think of the last name Miyazaki? Just popped out of no where? Yeah, the whole fight kinda shocked me and I was staring at my screen for a good four minutes just so I could finish the fic! Does Riku realize how much Sora loves him? The angst is absolutely killing me. But the emotions and feelings from each character is special in their own way. Taiyou is confused and Kairi is more than shocked. I do hope Riku is okay... even though he was mean to my little Sora-kun. ^^ All in all, great chapter! Continue at your own pace and we shall be waiting! -Echan2 ^_~
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Reviewed By: yaoifangirl On: June 23, 2004 01:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This is the first R/S fanfic I've ever read that had a story plot! It's amazing! Please continue the story!!! ^_______^ two thumbs up!! Your story is my favorite R/S fanfic now!!
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Title: @.@
Reviewed By: Echan2 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2004 16:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Constructive criticsm, my ass! You're getting a big, fat, GOOD review!!! Oh, wow, you are the goddess of Sora/Riku stories- may I worship you? *laughs* Kidding! But, seriously, I've been following this story- I've just been too lazy to review- and I love it. The emotions between the two boys are great, and now that Taiyou and Kairi are in here, it's even better! I eagerly await the next chapter! Check out my Kingdom Hearts story "My Immortal", if you wish. ^__^ Keep up the gerat story and writing!!! - Echan2 ^_~
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Reviewed By: sakayume (not logged in) [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2004 12:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
Kami, I love your story so much! I found it this morning and I just finished reading up to chapter 12. You've really done a great job so far; I love all of the twists you've worked into it. ^-^ Also, this is the first R/S fic I've read in which Riku shows any sort of weakness. I really, really like that. ^-^ Well, again, great job! Update soon, ne? Please?!
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Reviewed By: yamichaos(me!) On: May 29, 2004 17:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
I loved it, but that was evil. cut me off right when they were about to do the adult thing! sorry i haven't reviewed for awhile. been busy. but yah! keep writing and i'll keep reading
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Reviewed By: Blackrose Thorn On: May 19, 2004 16:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank all that is good in the world!!!!!You finaly wrote some more.I love it!!!!All of the Riku and Sora fanfics you write are the best.Please continue to write,only Kami knows what will happen if you don't:)
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Reviewed By: inumoon3 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2004 22:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this is inumoon3 again just wanted to let you know I love this story and was hoping if you could go and review my KH story. It's called 'The Keeper of my Heart' well till next time!
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Title: wow!
Reviewed By: DragonDame57 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2004 03:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omgsh i love this fic! man.. tayou's gettin on my nerves.. ^^;; he should just move on! hehe.. well this is the first fic that i read where i DIDNT hate kairi! even when she hurt sora.. it was amusing =] well i hope you update soon! um.. more riku/sora? ^^;;
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Title: lalala!
Reviewed By: kady [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2004 22:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is a really good fic! keep writing please!!!
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Title: New to the story.
Reviewed By: Silveriss On: April 01, 2004 00:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
First I would like to say I'm intrigued with this story. It's a very rare occasion where I believe yaoi is done well. I tip my hat to you. This is a tremendously good fic. Though I've played the game and I'm under the impression that the characters are completely out of sinc with the game, this is not the game so I won't ream you on it. You're creativity and imagination are fantastic. What I love the best, however, is how you capture the readers' attention with the brief glimpses of the characters' pasts. As I read all I could think of, besides the fact that it's a well-composed fic and very entertaining, is that the blend to keep the readers' interest is both subtle and bold. It's a perfect mix. I do so enjoy the work. I hope to read more soon.
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Reviewed By: Blackrose Thorn On: March 28, 2004 16:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I can say is write more!!!Please pretty please with a cherry and Riku on top.
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Title: Good!
Reviewed By: HotsummerYami [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2004 16:45 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh goodie! Keep the chappies coming! I dont want you to stop!!!! KEEP THE GOod wOrK COMIN!
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Reviewed By: -fake-wings- [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2004 00:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
don't do this to me!...or rather US! i don't like being in suspence!(but i like leaving other ppl in suspence, but DON'T DO THIS TO US!)
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Reviewed By: inoccent_asassin On: March 12, 2004 10:13 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I really like it A LOT. Really original! I like it heaps! keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: yamichaos(lazy to sign in) On: March 08, 2004 00:49 CST
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*purrs* i have an idea what to do with those hand cuffs and that police outfit *winks and points at Riku and Sora* but yeah, i loved it as usual. i dun have alot to say this time. bye!
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