| "Of Broken Hearts and Renewal" Reviews/Comments [ 50 ] |
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Reviewed By: (fireash) On: January 09, 2004 00:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay you updated! loved the new chapter. i guessed right! well hope to read more soon
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Title: Suki
Reviewed By: Suki [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2004 13:08 CST
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hey i'm back...i think..... well experct chapters coming soon.
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Title: Of Broken Hearts and Renewal
Reviewed By: Water_Goddess125 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2003 18:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fan fiction please write more soon I check to see if you do everyday so please please PLEASE! Get the next chapter up thank you so very much.
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Reviewed By: Aurora_thorn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2003 21:48 CST
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Doe! >.< Yes, I put this on my favorites but I changed my e-mail address before you posted you're second to latest chapter so sorry that I didn't update. *Starts hitting head against table* Doe! Doe! Doe! I'm so sorry. I would have reviewed if I knew. Sorry. Great chaps BTW. Now having read 2 of them in a row, I'm even more hooked and am dying to know more. Update soon please... oh and Fuzzy has something to say to the twins as well: Fuki-ti: MY NAME ISN'T FUZZY YOU DEMENTED CAT!!! Oh, anyway, I like the idea about the lasers and having 5 seconds to live and such, but I think it would be more enjoyable to have them have one minute to live so they admit everything that they've done wrong and begs god to forgive them and then they die, and we laugh about how pathetically desperate they sounded during their final minute. Another nice idea is to hire someone (or do it yourself) to point a gun at them and ask them to give at least 10 reasons why we should let them live. We listen to all their pathetic reasons like "I have a wife and kids" and then tell them that all of their reasons suck and no one likes them anyway and then shoot them. I like making fun of my victims afterwards.
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Reviewed By: Kym On: December 10, 2003 08:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice fanfic. Very original. Dont forget to come back to this fanfic!!
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Reviewed By: Kuroki On: December 08, 2003 00:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is a good story, yes I've read the whole thing. I just wish y'd right the next chapter...please
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Reviewed By: (fireash) On: December 03, 2003 18:18 CST
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sorry too lazy to log in. i understand you have to take a break and all just don't forget to come back ok. i really like this story. that is why it is on my favorites. :D
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Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2003 11:31 CST
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I think that i've rped too much or something, just think of what i was doing as playing along with some sort of storyline or something. don't worry too much about the length of your chapters so much as how good they will be. You seem to be doing a good job so far, so just keep writing, and try to have fun with it. so good luck with the rest of this story.
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Reviewed By: zuppy70 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2003 20:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I'm glade that my reviews brighten your day!!! ^_^ I love your story!!! hope to read more soon!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2003 15:11 CST
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I am kinda saddened. you said that i wouldn't like what the twins did with me. they haven't even found out yet, even though i was just trying to show them that improvements can be made. If they cant even take some light criticism, i dont know how they plan on achieving greatness. The story was a bit short, but still good. Although I think that inuyasha should still get his sword, due to the fact that later transformations might not be undone by just the rosary. tell the twins that their ideas aren't bad, but they might want to think a bit broader (or if they want help, to ask just make sure to include what kind of effects are desired). have a joyous life and fun writing the rest of this story.
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Reviewed By: fireash [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 20:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like your fic so far. very interesting. hmmm let me guess his guardians are... the younger one is shippou and the older one is sesshomaru. am i right am i right?!!! hehe sorry i got carried away. can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: zuppy70 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 19:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story is so good and cute!!! ^_^ I love your story!!! Update soon!!! ^_^
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Title: Of Broken Hearts and renewal
Reviewed By: Water_Goddess125 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 14:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree with Aurora thorn I hate people who leave cliff hangers and please update soon this is one of my favorites.
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Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2003 02:52 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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awesome story so far, and i think that the meeting for world domination might prove to be quite interesting. The ideas that the twins had for the death and torture of a person were fairly well thought out, although some improvements are to be had. As far as the story...guess inuyasha will have to start carrying around the tetsaiga so that he doesn't turn full demon. I am very curious about how he gets his memories back (or if he even ends up with them). The only ways that i can think of are probably sessomarou, naraku, or the sit command.who knows, and keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Suki [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2003 01:07 CST
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i did say what it was about!! if you were to read the fine print it is about: The demon wanting the jewel shards and then since they didnot have the shards decided to "eat" the villagers for strength. Heck it wasa spur of the moment..don't blame me...
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