| "Interviews of Teenage Mothers" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lord Archive [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2004 22:22 CDT
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Gray17, perhaps you missed the note in the story description of (This was made entirely for fun over the past year. Continuity and grammar may not be at my best. Or the comment in author's notes of Serenity's chapter about the Tea interview, While (Tea's) interview reflects a typical end of mythological hero cycle, I doubt that is how it would end as it would not exactly be a happy ending. While I had expected the Yu-Gi-Oh! manga to continue longer, but its ending does not detract from a little spam fict that COULD have been how it ended. Considering it an Alternate Universe along with the rest of the interviews and 99% of the fanfiction for Yu-Gi-Oh! out there. It has been made rather clear that Keiko's virginity was still intact into Dark Tournament arc. And do you really think that Tomoyo boinking Shaoran and Sakura was canon? These were done for FUN. Enjoy them for what they are or not, it's up to you. But if I had adhered strickly to canon, NONE of these interviews would be viable. I might do an 'Anzu' chapter that does use the end of Yu-Gi-Oh!, but I'll wait to see if 'Yu-Gi-Oh! R' to appear in V-Jump is truly a sequel or something else.
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Reviewed By: Gray17 On: April 13, 2004 17:17 CDT
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Though I'm fairly sure that your're aware of it by this point, the Yugioh manga's over and the difference between your mark and the reality could hide a few planets. Given that you yourself seem to have thought what you wrong would be as wrong as it is for Anzu's part, I'm curious as to why you decided to write it as such given that it turns Anzu's section into crap and all compared to your usual work.
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Reviewed By: queenserena12345 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2004 19:14 CST
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Now you have to do Sango and Miroku for Inuyasha!
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: ¶Æ¥C„58}žuU On: February 16, 2004 16:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool! hey for your yugioh part of the story why not rebeksh? heheh that be funny!!!
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Reviewed By: Gray17 On: February 14, 2004 15:39 CST
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Well first off, as part of my attempt at giving positive comments with the negative so I stop grinding perfectly good authors down, great story. The ages you decided to put were reasonable, and the pairings and the logic that went into the circumstances made sense. Overall, an enjoyable read. Now the negative stuff. Aside from the occasional grammar error, the only thing I have to complain about is some of the Yugioh stuff. Contrary to what you saw, the manga series is nearing it's end. The Ancient Egypt/Pharoh's Memories story arc is basically over, and taking into consideration what occurs in it, and the volume number it gets the series up to, I'm fairly certain it's the second to last story arc. Givin that Yugi's in good health at the end, and the general "everything's happy for our hero's" I have to state my protest at your guess at Yugioh's end, and my opinion that it worsens Anzu's section (I won't complain about your name choice, but I'll use whatever names I feel like). Anyways, otherwise it's a great little story. Ignore the people that are made quesy by the idea of several rather mature characters ending up getting a too early start on their family, especially as you've got several of them regreting their choices. I look forward to any future chapters you might write.
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Title: darkdemon11
Reviewed By: darkdemon11 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2004 21:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
VERY Disturbing. I have read sick fics before but that was just *shudders* sicking. I wouldn't continue.
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Reviewed By: insanecherry On: February 07, 2004 23:00 CST
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hi, plz tell me tat u'r joking rit. if u'r not i wod suggest therapy. i must give u credit 4 creativity. keep up the good work. and plz pretty plz next fanfic let it b less distrubing.bye and t2l
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Reviewed By: Momma Cat yeah... On: February 07, 2004 22:27 CST
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*sweat drop* Actually I said that Seto thing twice and just realized it. Really? I thought Mai was around Tea's age. Although Isis is twenty I believe. Serenity, a two-timer? Never saw that coming...
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Reviewed By: Alan Wilkinson On: February 07, 2004 09:50 CST
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Love the new chapter. VERY Interesting pairing. Wonder how Mokuba feels about being a Uncle? Actualy, there's a thought...
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Reviewed By: Veriona On: January 11, 2004 13:04 CST
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Please tell me that was a joke. If it was, thank god. If not, I'm very very concerned for your mental health.
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Reviewed By: surgedragonzerox On: December 27, 2003 13:40 CST
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hey i;m a big fan of all your fics! oh and can the next one be digimon, and make it a DAikari!!!!!DAikari ruls!!!!
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Reviewed By: Fruitloop Trooper [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2003 17:29 CST
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Well, nice to see that you haven't lost your style.
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Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2003 15:16 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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This was different and good. But I agree with Alan, why only one Yugioh cast member? There is Mai and Serenity, you could stick Isis in there. Made her get pregent by Kaiba. Or better yet, Serenity could have been with his child. That would be so funny.
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Reviewed By: Alan Wilkinson On: December 07, 2003 04:30 CST
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Huh. Interesting stuff, though I'm only familiar with two of the series featured. Only one charcter in the Yu-Gi-Oh section?
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Reviewed By: Dreg [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2003 19:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
LMFAO, It was really funny.
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