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Title: UPDATE PLEASE!!!
Reviewed By: ji-an [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2006 23:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT!!! I really liek the characters and the story please, please PLEASE!! Updadte more!!! Ji-an ova an out! ^_^.
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Reviewed By: Ashra On: May 07, 2006 18:35 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok, first of all I thought I had already left a review here about your a/n but seems like not... anyway, I was so happy when in my mail was an alert that I was almost caught at work and then I opnen the link and see thats just an author note, anyway it made me happy cuz I knew you were still alive!!! so im here just waitin for the next chap while readin (for the nth time) the fic from the start, really everytime i read the last chap i cry...thats what I love about this fic...besides other things, so pls come back asap, I know the next chap will be worth the wait. just a lil question-- they separated kagome from inu cuz hes a hanyou, but they're sending her to the family of naraku?? (am I wrong?) do the concil know that naraku's a hanyou?? I think I'll go to read it again to make sure I didnt miss anything. :P
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Title: Please Wright more Im begging you!!!!
Reviewed By: KagomeHig ( please dont kill me for that name) On: April 28, 2006 22:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi this is Sam I absolutly love your story Its filled with emotion like no other I acually cried Dont make fun of me I cried. Oh and One time I was up in the middle of the night ( at 2:30 am) and I Screamed when Miroku had interupted Inuyasha and kagome's moment when they were in bed and he opened the door on them then I heard my sister come in the room ( twin sis) Say " Shut Up!! Its freeken 2:30 in the morning!" Your story just Wiped me out!!! Oh just to tell you I am so looking forward for your next chapter I need kagome and Inuyasha Together!!! Aghhh! The suspence is killing me .. ( I m a little hyper right now.. Sry!!) *TWITCH*
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Reviewed By: AHH!! On: April 27, 2006 18:51 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I CRIED!!!!!!!!!! I DAMN CRIED!!! PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE
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Title: Please Wright more Im begging you!!!!
Reviewed By: KagomeHig ( PLease dont kill me for that name!) On: April 26, 2006 18:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi this is Sam I absolutly love your story Its filled with emotion like no other I acually cried Dont make fun of me I cried. Oh and One time I was up in the middle of the night ( at 2:30 am) and I Screamed when Miroku had interupted Inuyasha and kagome's moment when they were in bed and he opened the door on them then I heard my sister come in the room ( twin sis) Say " Shut Up!! Its freeken 2:30 in the morning!" Your story just Wiped me out!!! Oh just to tell you I am so looking forward for your next chapter I need kagome and Inuyasha Together!!! Aghhh! The suspence is killing me .. ( I m a little hyper right now.. Sry!!) *TWITCH*
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Reviewed By: Great fic! On: April 26, 2006 00:34 EDT
Comment/Review:
Love ur story, but be careful about that a/n. MM deletes accounts over stuff like that these days. @_@
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Title: Player!!!!!
Reviewed By: flrsblue-not-signed-in On: April 26, 2006 00:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH!!!! You so played me, i got so happy thinking a new chapter was posted i click it and what do i get 2 words (coming soon) lol :-)
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2006 22:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No worries. Take all the time you need, I know all too well how life can suck sometimes. Im just glad your beautiful story wasn't abandoned. Thanks for letting us know how you are and whats going on. Update when you can. We'll be waiting.
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Title: Are you O.K Yukiarashi?
Reviewed By: {Kairi + Sora } FOREVAA! On: April 25, 2006 15:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It has been like more than 4 months now since this fanfic's been updated...I'm not here to rush you or say something to make you hurry to complete the story, like I'm crying blood or tearing my hair to bits (THAT would be a sight!!!) but I'm a bit concerned about your welfare, you didn't appear or update for more than a few weeks now...noting bad happened to you these past few months right, like a sudden writers block or anything?I hope not... If that's why you've been absent for so long it's ok, authors do have to pass through this 'moment' some time or another..but we hope we'll see you back soon now, because you're a very good author, & you yourself just ROCK, & that itself shines a big light through all your stories. I really hope we'll see you around soon & in a happy -ImBACK!- writing mood. & fiuuuuu, don't we need to find out what's going to happen to Inu & Kagome now that they got separated for soo long, don't you agree? LOL!!;P
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Reviewed By: nightsky On: April 12, 2006 14:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed reading this story. It was such a drop when I realized it was not finished. I can't wait! Readinf these is a great way to procrastinate from work! Thanks for that ha! Hope you finish it soon!
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Reviewed By: Knock-on-Wood [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2006 19:44 EST
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Just wanted to leave you a note telling you that I love your story, it is very well written and holds a special place in my heart! :D I understand that real life can get in the way of updating and all that, so I'm not here to tell you to "Hurry up" or anything like that. Just wanted to say that when you do update, I will happily be the first in line to read. And I hope everything is going good for you in your real life and that you are doing great. :) Well...until next time then, take care!
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Reviewed By: Rai-Vendetta On: March 20, 2006 15:54 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Update soon please! Thank you!!
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Reviewed By: Drake C. On: March 15, 2006 21:55 EST
Comment/Review:
I find this story very well written, and I'm really enjoying reading it. I also like that you translate your Japanese. I have a home guide, so you've really helped me expand it. On that note, I have a few to add. Higurashi can also mean 'sunset', which is why you may sometimes hear Kagome's home refered to as the Sunset Shrine. Kagome itself also means 'woven basket pattern'.
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Title: The story IS awersome & great, BUT...^-^''
Reviewed By: The_big_whiner On: March 14, 2006 15:34 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please Please Please Please PLEASE update soon! It's been more than 2 months now since you've done so! I've been dying to find out what's gonna happen to Inuyasha & Kagome now that they have been separated by the council for WEEKS! Gah!!!! *starts tearing hair*
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Reviewed By: MME On: March 12, 2006 04:34 EST
Comment/Review:
another thing, where have you been getting your japanese translations? cuz, well, a lot of them are wrong. swears words are few very and most are determined by the tone of voice and not the actual word. in most cases, english would work best. some are correct, but a lot are not. also, some of your japanese phrases are incorrect, especially grammatically. for example, you write "nan da kore wa" as what is this? when it should be either "nani kore" or "kore wa nani" thats just the grammar of japanese. also, as an aside, its awkward to put straight japanese into the dialogue when your translations are at the end, it breaks up the story, and makes no sense to alot of people reading it. a word here or there is fine, but full phrases are really hard for most. just a few things for you to think on...i still love the story line though!
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