| "Demon Flux" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Reviewed By: Naruske On: February 11, 2004 18:59 CST
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UPDATE OR DIE!!!!!!!!! I AM THREATENING BODILY HARM TOO!!!!!(Somewhat)YOU MUST UPDATE!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: okasa-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2004 17:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the YYH/Naruto crossover and the tie-in of Youko with Naruto's fox. It's not painful to read (because of mispellings, typos, etc.). The reason I haven't rated higher is I think Yusuke is talking to soft. It is not clear to me how old Yusuke is supposed to be but he should be speak more thug like, no metter how much he can relate to Naruto's position. I also think Naruto isn't behaving as tough as he actually is. I think his reaction to fear, at this point is more to become angry than to melt. He's made that vow to himself.
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Title: Write it up
Reviewed By: Snowy Yuki On: February 11, 2004 04:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well... Love your story but hope there will be some humor in it in the future chapter. keep the story good and LLLLOTTTSSSS OF CHAPTER... Write it up!!!! +_+
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Reviewed By: -Natural C haos- On: February 10, 2004 14:07 CST
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XD I kinda like readin' this...^_^ *pats yer head* Don't sweat it...just do the best you can to try and get the ideas out. I've noticed most fics will write themselves if you let them. ^^ Keep it up! XD
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Reviewed By: Naruske On: February 05, 2004 15:30 CST
Comment/Review:
UUUUUUUPPPPPPPPDDDDDDDDDDAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I WILL DIE IF YOU DONT UPDATE!!!!!!! YOU WILL DIE FIRST THOUGH!!!!!! UPDATE OR DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Naruske On: January 26, 2004 17:32 CST
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GOD I WILL DIE IF YOU DONT UPDATE PLZ!!!!!!!! This is really awesome because Naruto and Yu Yu Hakusho are my favorites. PPPPPPPLLLLLLLLEEEEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: >^_^ On: January 25, 2004 10:18 CST
Comment/Review:
Not bad. I'd love to see where this is going.I like the crossover, YYH/Naruto ^_^.
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Reviewed By: Fallen Angel! On: January 19, 2004 22:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, first off I was too lazy to sign in...(sighs) but anywho, this was exellent in my opinion, and all I want from you is the next chapter. *suddenly gives puppy-dog eyes* Please?
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