| "Kagome Decisions" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: Faye273(NLI) On: February 10, 2004 00:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
Cute story, but if I could give you negative #'s in spelling and grammar I would. Contact me if you are interested in correcting the errors. I will be happy to act as your editor.
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Reviewed By: Relix On: February 07, 2004 17:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice...
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Reviewed By: bells_qt (I'm to tired to login) On: February 06, 2004 22:28 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm sorry if this rview sucks but its 12:30 in the morning and I'm soooooo tired.....Nywayz not bad actually! By the way I love your character Ren! Shes so kewl. Not really into lemons but it wasn't so bad. g2g bye
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Reviewed By: lanllnems [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2004 22:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
you should be more clear on the story. i don't really get what is happening in the story sometimes. oh, and you spell sango and kaide wrong. i enjoy reading the story so don't let this review get you down! ask for help if you need it.^_^
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Reviewed By: 12blue12(logged off) On: February 06, 2004 20:15 CST
Comment/Review:
coolie updae i hope ucan update soon cya!
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Reviewed By: 12blue12 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2004 16:33 CST
Comment/Review:
ooohhh lala well nice updates and i hope u can update soon cya!
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Reviewed By: Relix On: February 05, 2004 07:56 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice story.. i'm looking forward for more.
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Title: Ideas
Reviewed By: bells_qt [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2004 13:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I think that you could get Kag to tell them the whole story then that night she and Inu could both be awake and they get talkin' and you get the idea........Anywayz love the story!^^ g2g bye!
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