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Reviewed By: Miztikal_Dragon (not signed on) On: March 12, 2004 01:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. great chappie update asap. k? Krystal.
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2004 23:29 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I think the grammar really improved. Good for you for having someone read over the chapter! :) I'm surprised you got another chapter out so soon. Thanks :D
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2004 20:49 CST
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Eek, who's in Inuyasha's apartment? Oh no! The suspense! *dark music plays in the background*
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2004 23:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahaahahahahahahha I thought that last part was funny
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Reviewed By: Nagasaki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2004 16:08 CST
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i love the chapter! and the story so far!!! please hurry and update!
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Reviewed By: Zero Saotome On: March 10, 2004 10:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OooooH! He kissed her! I'm so happy! ^_^ I Love This Fic So Much! I can't wait to read more, especially since now Kagome-chan's warming up to Inuyasha. ^_^ It makes me so happy. Lol, I'm such an addict to InuxKag, MirXSan, and SesXRin. *snickers* I really like how you made Sango freak out after Miroku said she liked his perversity and the other girls teasing her. Hell, I like Everything about this fic. Please keep it up! ~Zero Saotome~
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Reviewed By: Daman 388 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2004 03:28 CST
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woohoo! go inu-kun!
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Reviewed By: Miztikal_Dragon(not signed on) On: March 09, 2004 21:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey great chappies INU/KAG!!! *laughs insanely* well update asap great work i love it lots. Krysta.
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2004 20:44 CST
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Don't worry about not writing enough, chapters are coming out fast enough. Good job! :) Please fix some of your grammar. My only suggestion is to get a beta reader. ^^
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Title: sweet
Reviewed By: kagachan On: March 09, 2004 18:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sweetness love the chapter
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Reviewed By: Orb (not online) On: March 09, 2004 18:00 CST
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w00t!! An update!! I have a huge list of updates to read, my interent was down. I can't wait to get to the next chapter you wrote!
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Reviewed By: KatGrrrrl99 On: March 09, 2004 00:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon!!!! :))
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Title: sweeet
Reviewed By: sweetthing_8012 On: March 07, 2004 22:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the chapter update again soon
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover (no time 4 signin' in!) On: March 07, 2004 07:41 CST
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He is really taking advantage of the fact he saved her life, isn't he? Hopefully things'll get better between them. Update soon!
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Title: koooo
Reviewed By: Daman 388 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2004 05:30 CST
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nice chapter tina, this is getting to be a pretty good fic so far hope you update soon! btw, lemme know if you need any help, i'm always here if you need me
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