| "The Lucky Ones" Reviews/Comments [ 1108 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2004 01:51 PST
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all the chapters i am reading tonight seem to be so long. don't get me wrong, i like reading them. but i think fate is bound and determined to make me stay up all night studing. of course it is kind of my falt that i'm not studing now. *thoughtfull look* poor yash left alone in the god tree. can't wait to read more, one because then i get to find out what happens and two because it means my mid-term tomarrow will be over. i think i hate art history, can you hate art history if you're a studio art major? nehoo. yeah, love the story. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: asylum100 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2004 14:52 PST
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This is one of the best fanfics I have read so far. I hope you go into how Inuyasha knows so much about pups. I would also love to see more of the Sango/Miroku relationship. Great story!!!
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Title: Chapter 12
Reviewed By: Del_kaidin(NLI) On: March 03, 2004 13:53 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there! Love the story... said that before didn't I? Well... what did I like about Chapter 12 - Inu trying to do the right thing for Kagome, even if it wasn't what he wanted. His promising to always come back. His very in character over protectiveness of Yukio and Kagome when he found out they were going in to town. I saw where one reviewer said the story was getting slow... I disagree... I think you are doing a good job of showing them moving closer together, and dealing with the fact that they are parents. True most stories would just leap past that, but what makes your's so good is that you don't. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: jezzjamer2 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2004 12:34 PST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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This is still a great fic, except that it's getting a little slow. I'm not really sure how to explain that. It's just...too...normal, I guess is the word I'm looking for. That probably doesn't make sense. But anyway, I really love this fic regardless of its very minimal short comings. There were a few spelling mistakes in the begining of the chapter but it wasn't terrible. I do have a question though; what does "kaa-san", "oyaji" and "outo" mean exactly? I realize that they refer to a parent some how. I just want to know the exact and/or lose translations, which I can't find anywere on the internet. Anyway, I can't wait to see how this fic progresses. Please update soon. Later.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_obsession [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2004 12:26 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY Another chapter read and replyed for! Please continue soon! I really love this story... sometimes I think I like it a little too much... Anyways write soon!
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Reviewed By: Adoette [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2004 23:06 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I swear to you, if you don't finish this fic, I will hunt you down and kill you. Gruesomely. But first I'll make you finish writing it. This is (so) far, the most original approach I've seen to getting Inuyasha and Kagome together. Inu's a little OOC at times (I've haven't seen the whole series so maybe it's just me,) but it fits well and is actually believeable. I plan on seeing if you've written anything else. Oh yeah, and thank you, thank you, thank you for not only spellchecking your story, but also proof-reading it. I've seen other stories that had good ideas, but were impossible to decipher. That makes one in a million in just one more way.
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Reviewed By: Krista On: March 01, 2004 20:52 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The style of writing is straightforward rather than lyrical, but it suits the storyline.Character development is excellent, covering much anticipated new ground while staying true to the original characters.This makes the piece at once more realistic and entertaining.I am most impressed.Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Inkwings On: March 01, 2004 20:37 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful, perfect story! ive never read anything like it! it's my favorite one EVER. u kept the characters in, well, character, and Yukio sounds so cute. please update soon. once again great job!!!!
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Reviewed By: Ummm.. lil ol' me! On: March 01, 2004 18:40 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wait let me find it let me find it... yup there is a bunch of sap... I LOVED EVERY MINUET OF IT!!!!!! LOL Anyways... FINISH! Insert a Good Death Theat here>>>"..........." End With Austin Power's Dr. Evil's Evil Laugh>>> "MUAH MUAH MUAH HA HA HA HA HA!!!!!!!!"
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Reviewed By: ME On: March 01, 2004 14:32 PST
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Great set of chapters!! had me crying >.
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Reviewed By: ME On: March 01, 2004 14:31 PST
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Great set of chapters!! had me crying >.
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Reviewed By: DelKaidin (NLI) On: March 01, 2004 09:07 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ack... I haven't reviewed this absolutely enchanting story? Bad Del... Bad. I love the way you have researched things. The fact of Kouga attacking and killing the pup. The induced Lactation. Wonderful. Even Kagome's mom's reaction.... Spot on. Loved Inu defending Kag to her Mom, and drawing the proverbial "Line in the sand" reminded me of my hubby doing that with my mom. Del
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2004 23:19 PST
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I'm not quite sure what to say to that. Those two chapters were perhaps some of the best chapters I have ever read. I am compleatly over whelmed and can not for the life of me think of anything to say. I love this story. Up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: Kzands On: February 29, 2004 20:15 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely LOVE this fanfic! Please don't stop writing it anytime soon. One of the best I've read so far! :)
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_obsession [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2004 17:01 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is that the end? Please don't say it's over!!! It can't be over it's just getting good! Please continue writing soon! I love this story so SO much! I look forward to the next chapter! You are on my list of favourite authors so when you update expect a quick response from me! BYE!
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