| "The Lucky Ones" Reviews/Comments [ 1108 ] |
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Title: I wish
Reviewed By: Kendraless [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2014 04:53 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cannot believe it has been 10 years, I think I know this story by
heart. I read it again for the millionth time and it never gets
old. Terri Botta thank you for writing one of the best stories I
have read in my life. I wish someone makes a manga out of your
story.
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Reviewed By: AC On: February 28, 2013 18:44 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! |
Title: HI
Reviewed By: AC On: February 15, 2013 21:09 PST
Comment/Review:
agreeing with other people u should make a sequel!!!!!! for the love of Kahone this is a good story im going cra cra look what u have done to me!! i blame you! you ammazing story writer |
Reviewed By: AC On: February 15, 2013 21:05 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
well honestly i never would of suspected the kikyio and midiroki(cant spell their names sorry) to merge together great story i just cant wait to read the rest |
Reviewed By: kickassinu On: November 18, 2012 19:43 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i loved it i think you should do a sequel if you haven't already it was very exciting to read a i would love to read more of your work peace |
Reviewed By: BeautyxIsxEverlasting [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2012 23:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love you. Lol, you have been my inspiration since I read this fic several years ago. In fact, this was the story that introduced me to the fanfiction world. I will never forget this story. I printed it all off years ago just in case something happened and it was deleted. I look back to the fic for inspiration and I reread it every couple of months. I have a review on here from years ago and I even personally contacted you through email to talk. I may sound creepy, lol but I assure you I am not :) I just can't believe it has been so long since I was introduced to this story. I made this account since I lost the log in information from my other one and thought I would let you know you are my favorite fanfiction author and I am in awe at your writing skills. I hope you are doing well! I wish everyone who loves the Inuyasha fandom has the chance to read this at least once. Thank you for time that went into this story. |
Reviewed By: RinHitokiri [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2012 16:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME! I sat down and tried to read through this in one sitting and it took me like 8 hours to finish it. I really liked how you wrote this this and I can't even write down everything that I loved about this! Keep up the fantastic writing! |
Reviewed By: botticelliangel (not logged in) On: May 19, 2012 13:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I first started reading this story back when you were still writing it. I loved it then, and I love it now! Kudos, and pat yourself on the back for creating something so epic! |
Title: wow
Reviewed By: paigemarie87 On: March 20, 2012 18:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I couldn't put this down! It brought back my total love for inuyasha. Thank you for sharing your fanfic, it was amazin |
Reviewed By: Lai Lai On: November 27, 2011 19:21 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of those few fanfics that you come across that just draws you in and you can't help but feel connected to it, I mean this story was from back in 2004 and looking at some of the reviews you're still getting them 7 1/2 years later... that's just... amazing. I'm a quick reader and it took me about a full two days to get through this and this is one of those stories that I could sit for a week just reading. I don't think I've ever been so captivated by a story. What makes it different is that it's not the common: Problem, fight, happy ending. This is a complete turnaround and is family based and on the much softer side of things. I've printed out this story so I can read it again at later dates (you never know when things might disappear) Your writing style is just amazing and extremely well done. I'm a beta reader and have gone over plenty of stories and seen so many errors it surprises me. The fact that you really put research into this is another testament to how well of a writer you are. Although I won't lie, I did kind of skim through the Shinto wedding bit, but that's just me. There's so much more to be said, but I doubt I can convey everything in my mind about this story. Basically it left me smiling at parts, laughing at others and building up tears at sad moments, it's so easy to connect with this story that it's crazy. All I can say is... well done and I hope that you're an actual writer and get paid for it, you certainly deserve it. |
Reviewed By: HelaineBrief [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2011 09:30 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to let you know how much i loved this i have never reallybeen one to read fanfics but i decided to check a few out and when i found luckys ones i fell in love i absolutely loved this story i am usually a slow reader because i am easily distracted but i spent pretty much a week straight doing nothing but reading this story it is wonderful and you are a very good writer i thought your versitilaty was wonderful u could jump from a fight scence to a love scence to a serious tense scence i will surely be checking out others you have written |
Reviewed By: venuslegacy not logged On: February 18, 2011 04:49 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an amazing riveting fantastic epic, with one of the best inuyasha characterisations I have read. I rally enjoyed this story watching the growth and development of their relationship, so beautiful and sweet, you really allowed us to see the strength of their bond and the love they have for each other. A truly remarkable story. |
Title: LOVE IT!!!!
Reviewed By: inyu01 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2011 10:49 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I JUST WANT 2 SAY I LUV THIS FANFIC!!! N I NEVER THOUGHT THERE WAS ANYONE WHO FANFIC WAS BETTER THAN SUERIC!!! I READ THIS FANFCI ABOTU 3 TIMES!!! I JUST LUV IT!!! AND I THINK U R AN AWSOME AUTHOR!! |
Reviewed By: A Friend On: December 28, 2010 10:20 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your story! Usually I only read short Inuyasha fic's but this one was exceptionally well written. The story was good and you kept the characters true to the way the originally are in the manga. It made me laugh and cry, with everything in between.Thank you for writing and I hope you continue to do so in the future. |
Reviewed By: ananova [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2010 03:54 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of my all time favorite fics. I just reread it because I saw that you had updated the sequal and I still love it. Though I am curious if you have a list of Kagome and Inuyasha's children and the type of youkai available? It can get a bit confusing at times. And as I was reading this last time a small plot hole jumped out at me. If those of youkai blood and those with Talent, such as miko, can see through the concealments, then why did neither Kagome nor Inuyasha realize that Buyo was Kirara? How come they couldn't see throught the disguise? Like I said, it's just a minor point but I was curious. Anyway, excellent job and I'm sure that I'll be rereading it again at some point. Excellent work. |
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