| "Mokuba's Slumber Party" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Title: ryou's girl
Reviewed By: lala girl On: March 11, 2004 12:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think its great so far! Keep up the good work dude!
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Reviewed By: The Shinigami Tenshi On: March 09, 2004 23:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a cute start. And hey I'm not the only sadistic bitch who wants reviews for chapters. And for mine, I know Ryou had a sister(she died) and was a step sister.////_^ keep writing. Thorn
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Reviewed By: foxfire9 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2004 06:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED it! PLEASE update soon!
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