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| "Loop Hole of Love" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 ] | Reviewed By: Yelene and Yoshe [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT?! You're ending it there??????? Don't get me wrong, it was eloquently done, but it's just so abrupt for your story. And how can you say that no one reads your story? Just check the visit rate. Trust me on this, very few bother to review...ever. I hardly get any reviews. But you shouldn't stop. At least not yet anyway. A good friend once told me, if only one person reads it, you've already affected at least two lives. So if only one person reviews or even visits, it is still important to them. People's views change everyday, but those that are true have been there from the beginning. Even I have read this story since it first started, but never got around to reviewing before. And, beside the point, it's important to you! You wouldn't have written it, if it wasn't. You wouldn't have been updating so much in the past couple weeks if it wasn't. So if it's important to you, you shouldn't change your course for ANYONE. You are a GOOD writer, and the more you write, the better you become. You have done so well so far. Do you really want to give it up now? I shall support you and your decision either way, but just to let you know, MM.org is considering getting rid of "you" stories and readers will have to find other 'scapelets for original characters. I really hope you will reconsider your decision but I care about you and this story, so I'll get over it if you decide not. I wish you the very best of luck and hope I will see more of your work in the future.
| Title: You have no idea...!
Reviewed By: kirby_04 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 20:59 CDT
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You have no idea how hard it is for me to find a good original character insert into fanfics these days. Hell, even when that was the thing before the "you" inserts, it was hard to find one. And even though you did end it there, it was very well, and GRACEFULLY done. I mean, I use the "you" point of view for my stories (b/c I prefer original characters) just so people will come read my story; then they found out that I just did that to get them to read; my "you" has a defined personality that I've created, so it's like sneaking a character like Avari in, ya know? I just want to say that I -did- enjoy your story, and I hope that you can get that out of the tone I'm writing this with. It was a great story, and I appreciated it, even if it took me a while to get back and read your final chapters. I just hope you find your niche in the writing world somewhere, hell, I'll even promote you. At first, I was like you when it came to writing, but then I tried my "you" plan, and it worked. And I'm coming to advertise my other friend to help him out. I just don't want you to feel left out because you ARE a good writer, and you shouldn't let those other people make you seem like you aren't. Well, I guess I've stepped off the soap box for now, but I hope to maybe hear back from you or something or other...^__^
| Reviewed By: Yelene and Yoshe [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 20:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very good story so far, and it is quite obvious that you most certainly are not suffering from writer's block at the moment. I am truly enjoying this story. It has the potential of Bakura/Avari, Yami/Avari (which I favor), Domino/Avari or even Seto/Avari. it is quite mysterious how the end will turn out, but you have developed your character Avari quite well. The change between masters added varity to the plot. I am looking forward to a greater development of Avari's relationship to the Dark Elf as well as the othr men in her life. I can't wait to see how it will all turn out, so please update soon. P.S. You posted the last chapter four times. Just to let you know.
| Reviewed By: kirby_04 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2004 21:16 CDT
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I really love this story! Um, I little lewd for my tastes, but I like the thing you have going for it...Um, for some reason, I woulda guessed Bakura let Avari be with Seto just to spite her. What evil Bakura holds...! >D
| Reviewed By: witchhunterR [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: witchhunterR [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 18:35 CDT
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pls pls update
| Reviewed By: witchhunterR [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2004 17:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Goodjob ilike this story alot.i cant wait for the next chapter!
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