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"Little Lady Bug!!!" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ]
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 Reviewed By: Raven haired saiyan  On: March 09, 2004 18:44 CST
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*Stops for a moment* Whoops I forgot to say something about the second chapter. Now let me think, it was funny, kinda like the funny part like in the disney movie Black said awhile ago, and I give up on what Baku wrote about Tallagen-ese.(?) Oh! And like the part when Shute said 'Matting dance'! Sometimes I wonder if he's really my evil long-lost brother that my parents never talked about. COOL! Speaking about Black, I BETTER MAKE LIKE INSPECTER GADGET AND GO, GO, GO! *Runs like the living hell*
 Reviewed By: Raven haired saiyan  On: March 09, 2004 18:28 CST
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*Appears suddenly* Wait, this isn't the path-way to the comic convention, what am I doing here? *Blink then looks down at Black* *Thinks* Should I, or should I not? *Shrugs and pushes Black in the water* TAG YOU'RE IT! *Quickly runs off* Can't wait for what happens next Yami-san!
 Reviewed By: Black B. Kirin  On: March 08, 2004 23:33 CST
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^-^ Kewl. It's all good. I personally liked ... *can't decide* Aww... never mind... I should just wait until the next update... *sits down and waits*
 Reviewed By: NeoYami (>.>)  On: March 08, 2004 23:26 CST
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I think i did get that from that movie, Black. ^^; That was my fave part of the movie....heh
 Reviewed By: Black B. Kirin  On: March 08, 2004 22:19 CST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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*trying desperately not to laugh out loud* This is very good! Is it really your dream? Nice... my dreams make no sense... When Baku said the whole "Is this MY VOICE?", it reminded me of Disney's Emperor's New Groove! LOL! That was a great movie... okay, um, the whole bug-love thing with the crickets and grasshoppers... um... 0_0 No comment. I also had no comment about what Baku wrote since I had no idea. That is, until Greend Devil called Zero a perv. Then my own pervy mind clicked and I got it! :D Yay! Yeah... I know I'm slow... Heh. *rereads A/N* YOU'RE NOT GOING TO UPDATE TWILIGHT'S GLEAM??? X_X NOOOOOOO!! *faints then revives to threaten Green Devil ineffectively* You'd better hurry and write!! Please??! *pause* Wait... threats don't have 'please' in them.... crap, I'm not good at this... -_-; Well, I hope you update this story instead than. Good Job!
 Reviewed By: Green Devil [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 08, 2004 21:03 CST
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Lol! Poor Baku. What WOULD happen if some other ladybugs came along? o_O Lol! I know what Baku wrote! I know what Baku wrote about Tallgeese! XD! Hey! Bad Zero! What a perv. What--what--what?! You won't update till I do?! NOOOOO! We'll never be able to read another chapter of Twilight's Gleam again! I am the slowest updater in the world! Urgh! And what's worse is that I actually got pretty far with the next chapter today but my little sister started pressing buttons on the keyboard and she made it go all fuzzy! I didn't get to save anything! >_< I had to start it all over. T_T *sigh* I'll do my very best to get a new chapter out as soon as I can! That will hopefully be by wednesday, tomorrow at the earliest. Well, great fic! Hope you write more soon! ^_^!
 Reviewed By: Raven haired saiyan  On: March 08, 2004 19:24 CST
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Eh, I'm right here. *waves* I think everyone else is busy doing other reviews. Grasshoppers doing threesomes? o.O Now that's sick than crickets doing it.
 Reviewed By: NeoYami [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 08, 2004 18:49 CST
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Lady bugs eat afids!!(sp) I know this, cuz my mom is a gardener. ^^; They';re reeeaaaally small bugs and...oh...Baku's not gonna like that...^^;
 Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 08, 2004 18:48 CST
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Totally off subject, I've seen grasshoppers have a threesome. It was wrong too...O__o
 Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 08, 2004 18:46 CST
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e_e Oh nevermind! ^^;
 Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 08, 2004 18:45 CST
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O.o Kay then...*sighs* I don't know how or why that reminds me of when Krysti kicked a hole in her wall when she got mad (not a small hole either 9_9). I'm retireing-no, I'm just not going to write ANYTHING in May. I was going to do it April, but my friend talked me out of it. What if other lady bugs got...sexually active with Baku. O_o Eeep! XP I've always wondered what lady bugs ate...6_6 Am I stil the only reviewer? Where are Raven, Black, and GD?
 Reviewed By: Raven haired saiyan  On: March 08, 2004 17:11 CST
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*While smiling* I'm not asking. Still it's funny! Baku's afriad of bugs RW?
 Reviewed By: Green Devil [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 08, 2004 13:50 CST
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Lol! This fic made me crack up! Especially the end! Aw, Zero's being prtective of him. Wonder why. ^_~ So can Baku talk as a ladybug? And about my fic, well if you're gonna threaten me like that I'll have to update. But be patient. I can't type as fast as you and I have no idea what should happen next. Anyway, great fic! Hope you write more soon! ^_^!
 Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 08, 2004 13:48 CST
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Was I the first reviewer? yay! ^-^
 Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 08, 2004 13:48 CST
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And Tallgeese just HAPPENS to think 'oh wwell, I got rid of one of them' and flies away. T_T I've had freaky dreams before, but most of the time I don't dream. The only anime influeced dream I evah had was with DBZ- I too tried to write it down (note the tried 9_9) But this is funny! Isn't Baku AFRAID of bugs?! lol, weird man! can he talk?
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