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| "So you wanna date Seto Kaiba?" Reviews/Comments [ 28 ] | | Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] | Title: heh
Reviewed By: MysticalAngelOfDarkness On: March 14, 2004 19:14 CST
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I forgot to enter clothesHeh Clothes: She wears a long blue dress like the only Cecilia wears in the picture at Peguses's castle. She also wears a tight black thick strapped shirt and a short black skirt with a long flowing black trench coat, she's a goth.
| Title: I wanna be a character plz
Reviewed By: MysticalAngelOfDarkness On: March 14, 2004 19:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Name: Sharahi Age:14 Desription- Hair:Long silky black hair reaching her knees with midnight blue glittering streaks Clothes: Eyes: Dark soft Hazel Height:4'8 And anything else you can whip together! Background: She had a single mother named, Sanri, Her father had passed on three years ago and she was still trying to accept the fact he is gone. MISC: She carries a black and red flowered Kodachi and she was about to kill herself with it, that is when she met seto. She is very emotional but is quite independant and strong but anything happens to the ones she loves she fights to the bitter end and when she can only stand there and watch she normally cries but stays strong for the one in trouble. She is a reliable friend but is terriblly shy around ne people, she blushes alot when around others.
| Reviewed By: Seto_YamiMyLovers [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2004 20:57 CST
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Sorry,i accidently left something out in Background.Background: Half Jap. from father.Half chinese from mother.Originally from Jap.,then moved to China when she was 5.Parents splitted apart when she was 3.When she moved to China when she was 5,it was to leave her father. Never knew father,lives with mother.When 10,father called while on his deathbed apologizing about her not knowing him,and so she,her brother,and her mother went back to Jap.Stayed in Jap. for the rest of her years.Older brother is very protective over her,Hiroshi. Sorry everything was confusing.^-^;;
| Reviewed By: Seto_YamiMyLovers [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2004 20:53 CST
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Name: Harika Huynh Age: 15 Hair: I starngely have three colors,though,its not split like Yami's or anything.It's all mixed together.Black,hazel,dark brown.In the sun,it looks like it has gold in it,but that's just the hazel.It's always down,rarely up.Reaches to waist. Eyes: Sunset Backround: Half Jap. from father.Half chinese from mother.Originally from Jap.,then moved to China when she was 5.Parents splitted apart when she was 3.When she Never knew father,lives with mother.When 10,father called while on his deathbed apologizing about her not knowing him.Has older brother who is very protective over her,Hiroshi. Personality: Calm most of the time.She doesn't smile much because of her life.Sensitive on the subject of her father but tries to be strong and hold back tears.Strong willed girl who doesn't give up in anything.That pretty much explains her.
| Title: pick me pick me
Reviewed By: setoluver On: March 12, 2004 20:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
name:senko,age:15,description:beautiful,skinny, black-haired girl,clothes:white tube top and tight black skirt,eyes:green,height:5'4,misc.:parents died at age 8. thank you for your time :)
| Reviewed By: Hotaru's Daughter On: March 12, 2004 19:31 CST
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Name: Kimberly Hunter Age: 13 Hair: long(reaches below the waist) Auburn Eyes: Rich Chocolate brown Height: 5"4 Background: Filipina-American Clothes: knee-high black leather boots, short black skirt, black t-shirt under black leather trenchcoat
| Reviewed By: melody (who's not logged in) On: March 12, 2004 13:14 CST
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name: Sydney age: 17 hair: wheat and loose and falling back cloths: anything height: 5ft 6in background: Yugi's long lost sister. They were seperated at birth. misc: LOVES Kaiba.
| Title: ff.net
Reviewed By: Freai On: March 11, 2004 16:12 CST
Comment/Review:
I already reviewed your story on ff.net. My pen-name was Freai: But I think I put my naem as Katy.
| Reviewed By: harleypunk555 On: March 10, 2004 05:28 CST
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I also decieded to leave a comment. It's an awesome Idea, And I also forgot to mention that my character has blue green eyes that change color depending on weather of her mood(it really happens to me in real life..... But it's a really kewl idea
| Reviewed By: Harleypunk555 On: March 10, 2004 05:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Name: Meg Age: 16 Hair: Long Brown pulled back or down Clothes:Jeans with a black tee and Leather Jacket and boots Height:5'7" Notes: Likes Harleys, Piano, and Guitar,and any type of fast moving vehicles. Was Friends with Seto before he was adopted
| Reviewed By: Jenna Casey On: March 09, 2004 21:19 CST
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Name:Jenna Casey Age: 13 Desription- Cool, like Seto, and likes anything that has to do with technology and fun things. Hair: brown, waits length, and natrualy curly Clothes: Tight leather pants, a hot pink tube top Eyes: Clear Blue Height: 5'7
| Reviewed By: shadow_kazul [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2004 04:51 CST
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i just thought i would mess with ya and not do what u said. i have been known to do that. anyway it was a good idea this story. and if u want to delete my old post so i could try again please do so.
| Reviewed By: Momma Cat DD On: March 08, 2004 22:47 CST
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Jeez it maybe just me, and its not meant to be mean to other girls, but couldn't they leave a comment rather then just info? I likes the i-deer! Its like a game show! One I wouldn't mind winning! Or at least getting a booby-prize... *wink wink* Name: Diana Age: MAX 16? Uh I'm older then that, does that disqualify me? If it makes it easy for you I'm sixteen! (two years ago) Discription: Blonde hair black roots (yup not real) Clothes: A halter lavender top and a black lacy skirt Eyes: Brown Height: 5'5 Background: I've got a brother who likes to call himself Kiba (it was a Christmas joke blunder) That's every relative that is interesting MISC: Well I LOVE the way Seto talks. You know, how he always is bent on power and talks 'big'. I'm such a fan girl for it. I'm sure you could add that in somehow. That's all. I love self-inserts and this one is certainly is orginal. Cool idea! (Doesn't it almost seem like I'm kissing your @$$? ^_^)
| Reviewed By: mariks apprentice [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2004 22:39 CST
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Name: Yuki, Age: 15, Hair: Black with one white streak on the side, Clothes: Black tanktop and black pants, Eyes: Light blue, Height: 5'6" Background: Lives with her older sister because her parents died Attitude: She is pretty shy, but once she makes a friend she will do anything to help that person out. Loves to fight and hates to lose (and she dosent lose very often). And is a computer hacker.
| Reviewed By: Saelbu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2004 21:15 CST
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Name: Sarah Age: 16 Hair: Bluish Black, long it reaches mid-way down the back. Eyes: Sapphire Background: Originally from Japan, but moved to America when she was 6. MISC: She usually stays calm, but has a nasty temper, and is known for not backing down from a challenge in either duel monsters or martial arts.
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