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Reviewed By: Raven haired saiyan On: March 26, 2004 18:51 CST
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Finally I'm back from being sick, I feel so much better now until I got to the part where Sayla came in and ruined Shute's life. Why did SHE have to come in of all things? *grumbles something incoherent* Anyways, keep the two as buddies please. PS: While I was reading this I started getting an idea for a fic after playing my new game on Gamecube put together. It's a crossover basically and I was wondering...if I can sort of use a little bit of your idea of him being a cyborg when I post a fanfic here someday? *looks down* I don't know why I even ask.
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Reviewed By: sanitys_requiem [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2004 19:53 CST
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i hate sayla shes so stupid and naive its embarrassing. where'd u think of shute's nickname bebop, i thought of the tv show cowboy bebop, i luv that show , its great....oh well, time to have coffee^.^
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Reviewed By: Green Devil (don't feel like loging in -_-) On: March 25, 2004 18:56 CST
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Um, I kinda feel sorry for Shute about the monster thing. Stupid Salya. Shute shouldn't have saved her, especially if since she acted like that. *stiffles laughter* You're not suppose to do that to your friend. Tsk, tsk. Yeah.... Anyway, write more! ^_^!
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Reviewed By: Black B Kirin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2004 18:51 CST
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As cute as those two are... keep 'em buddies! XD I think it's better that way since... since they're... uh... what's the word I'm looking for? 0_0 Darn short-term memory... I need my ale to think! Why did you take it away, why? ;_; Oh well, I shall have my revenge... myahahahah... *rubs hands together* But! Anyways, the story was touching... it kinda reminds me of a spoof of adolescent years. ^-^ Good job! *laughs at the image of Shute VS Sayla Boxing match*
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Reviewed By: Green Devil [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2004 21:17 CST
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Lol! Stupid Shute. I can't believe that that was all he did. He could've done a little more. Lol! Write more! ^_^!
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Reviewed By: Raven haired saiyan On: March 24, 2004 20:24 CST
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Don't get hooked on the 'ale too much Black, you might make another vortex appear again or something. *Chuckles* Who would've thought Shute could go so low to the ground. He reminds me of my friend Luke, who did a lot of things kind of like that back at his public school! The teacher or whatever that guy is who was doing these things to Shute really did deserve it! And like Black said this is pretty funny you-know-what!
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Title: HA!
Reviewed By: Charon the Sabercat On: March 24, 2004 20:16 CST
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Thank you thank you thank you thank you once again Neoyami! (Hey, that's the first time I've called you by name before. Cool.) That drill sergeant guy deserved it (although it would be better if Shute was expelled and sent to a better school). Long live the human Gundam! DEBORAH SALE-BUTLER ANSWERED MY POST ON AN SD GUNDAM MESSAGE BOARD! The URLs in your guestbook! Read it and be amazed! (so proud)
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Reviewed By: Black B Kirin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2004 18:08 CST
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AHAHAHAHAHAHAAA! *still laughing uncontrollably* HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAHAHAHAHHA! Holy flying Crap, that's some funny Shit!! XD *grabs some ginger ale* Dude... I'm hooked on this. Is that bad? *blinks* Oh well. *chugs it* Yay! *hic* Captain's such an innocent goody-two sh-*hic* shoes. He oughta have known! LOL *hic* So much for training... can't even tell an evil plot in the making when it's right in front of him... *hic* But it was so funny! =^-^= Love the stories Yami! *hic* Keep'm commin... *drinks more ginger ale* (Yami? I took your SD test. It was soooo funny! Not to mention original. And funny! And creative. And funny! And the desc's for the characters were true to the core. And did I mention funny? BTW, did you take your own test? Which chara did you get? ^-^))
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Reviewed By: Black B. Kirin On: March 21, 2004 17:30 CST
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Well, that's everyone's opinion for you. I have my own and you guys have yours. ^-^ Personally, I just don't give a hoot about Sayla. She's just... there. Shute is also just... there. BUt he talks more. So I guess that's slightly better? Meh. But the Shute in this story is pretty neat. He said "Oh joy!", which is what I sometimes say too! Of course it's behind the teacher's backs... but still. Wow... whippy thing-ama-bobber... scary! Military school, the poor kiddo! Hope things get easier... or at least less depressing! Good story, Neoyami! YAY! Keep it up!
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Title: Poor Shute-chan!
Reviewed By: Charon the Sabercat On: March 21, 2004 16:34 CST
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You guys have it out for the poor boy, don't you!? How terrible! Why would Haro put him in such a terrible school!? Shute had better blow up some people with his laser vision soon! (walks out of view) Shute, come here and let the sabercat hug you, doesn't look like anybody else is gonna!
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Reviewed By: RW On: March 21, 2004 15:59 CST
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*shudders* Well, you know what, I never cared about Sayla, she reminds me of white clouds. They sit there. The move a little depending if the wind's blowing. Woop-de-fricken-doo! And Shute's much more involved with your surroundings-like a tree branch poking you in the eye or someone with spiniach in their teeth. o___. Ew... I like rambleing. XD
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Reviewed By: RW On: March 21, 2004 15:50 CST
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Wow, I almost feel sorry for the little android... >:] Almost! *crackles evilly* O.o' I gotta stop doing that...NO! Shute is WORSE!! What is with this blonde factor?! Every guy I've evah dated and almost all of my friends ARE BLONDE!! It makes me think...and that's a scary thing. XP Shute is more annoying and that's FINAL!! X( Stupid lil' brat!
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Reviewed By: Raven haired saiyan On: March 21, 2004 14:41 CST
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Shute went to Military school!? Dear God, I'm so glad that it wasn't me! ((Mind you, you might go there as well if you keep saying things like that.)) You just had to say that didn't you? -_-; ((Would you wheather get hit with that whip instead?)) No. ((Good cause I don't have any hands to do it.)) *sighs* It's good that I'm not the only one who supports Shute, but does he really look like Sora? *looks in the mannual to double check* Hum....it's a thought. And Sora is my favorite main character in the game. Oh well. I don't know what the whip thing is called either. I'll try to find out later.
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Reviewed By: Green Devil (no time to log in) On: March 21, 2004 12:28 CST
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Lol! Military school! Sucks for him! Lol! And it's nice to know that you're not gonna make him as annoying as he is in the show. Write more! ^_^!
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Reviewed By: Raven haired saiyan On: March 19, 2004 23:44 CST
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*falls on the floor laughing* You've got that right!
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