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"Stepping Away from the Past" Reviews/Comments [ 113 ]
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 Reviewed By: nitre angel  On: July 30, 2004 03:37 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
wow that was great. i was a little confused about the whole two people in one with the fox demon but then i thought i had gotten it, then i got confused again too many names for one person. but as long as you don't use that name that he introduced himself as i get it. this has to be one of the strangest fics i have ever read, yet it is also really interesting. i can't wait to up date again. what's with every one making out or doing "other" stuff? and is it just me or is sess acting as if he like's kag i mean really like her? i think kag and the fire demon should hook up they sound as if they would make a nice couple. umm well i really enjoyed your fic can't wait for you to update and bye for now.
 Reviewed By: DementedChild  On: June 29, 2004 22:50 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great job! great story! Awsome pairings! update soon!
 Title: Chapter 4
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 29, 2004 11:03 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Interesting story. Update again soon. Can't wait to see how you get Hiei/Kagome together, what happens to the rest of the group, and who has the artifacts the SD have to retrieve.
 Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 29, 2004 11:01 CDT
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 Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 25, 2004 10:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
great fun. plz update more soon!
 Reviewed By: blood bunny  On: June 24, 2004 13:13 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Please update soon! I really love this story! You need to update soon! i'll DIE if you dont'! You don't want that to happen do you? because if it does then I'll hunt you for the rest of your life! See now you don't want that to happen do you? anyway... like I said before... UPDATE!
 Title: WTF?
Reviewed By: inufreak1056  On: June 24, 2004 01:06 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10
Comment/Review:
KAGOME and HIEI? Well ok it could be ok but KAGOME and HIEI?...? Oh make the lemon stuff good...hehe ~_^
 Title: wtf?
Reviewed By: inufreak1056  On: June 24, 2004 01:04 CDT
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 Reviewed By: Chey1391 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 23, 2004 21:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
could it be a Hiei/Kagome, Kurama/Botan, Sesshomaru/Kagura, Sango/Miroku. Maybe Kikyo/Inuyasha, but only if Kikyo becomes good or like helps them kill Naraku or Kikyo/Naraku turned good all to kill another evil that was controling Naraku who was like a expanision who thougt that way but notmutch.That'd be cool if Naraku was actuly good not evil.Any ways Inuyasha should be dragged to hell by another person.And when the Sacred Jewel is complete midirokoo gives Kagome a new soul thats not a demon but not humon ether and Kikyo turns all the way good with 'her' soul back.That would be toataly cool!!
 Reviewed By: Chey1391 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 23, 2004 21:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
WWWWWOOOOOoOOOOOWWWWW MORE!!!please
 Reviewed By: badassreviewer  On: June 23, 2004 18:37 CDT
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This fic is awesome! I hope this is a Hiei/Kag not Sess/Kag only cause I see them more as bro and sis! Anyway it was really good and I loved the new chappy 4.
 Title: YAY!!!
Reviewed By: jenipenny  On: June 08, 2004 00:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
I just reread them and they were great as usual!! hehe.. Umm yeah i hope to read more soon!
 Reviewed By: Stephanie B.  On: June 07, 2004 17:36 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Definitely Hiei/Kagome, Kurama/Botan, Sesshomaru/Kagura, Sango/Miroku, and Kanna/Kohaku. Maybe Kikyo/Inuyasha, but only if Kikyo becomes good. Please update soon, it's a really good story!
 Reviewed By: Phyco Pyro  On: June 07, 2004 14:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
I vote 4 kikyo DIE!!!!!! >:D and I also vote 4 sess/kagura and sango/miroku,anyway this story is awsomely awsome,keep it up.!!
 Title: nope
Reviewed By: shiroi hana  On: June 06, 2004 15:35 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
KIKIYO DIES. HIEI/KAG. SESS GOES (BOOTS SESS AWAY FROM HIEI/KAG)KOHAKU/KANNA MIRO/SANGO KUR/BOTAN AND RIN/SHIPPO! HEY.AND INU ALONE ALONE(ECHOS) ja'ne
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