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Reviewed By: ngdtegyrjmy On: November 13, 2004 20:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story i liked it
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Title: wow!
Reviewed By: sataria On: October 25, 2004 21:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was an awesome story, but i really am hoping its not just a one shot... This as a wonderful story, and very clever *winkwink* I hope you write another chapter for it!
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Reviewed By: Karoru Metallium On: May 24, 2004 11:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I giggled, indeed xDDD. You're very articulated, and managed to write a PWP that's not quite a PWP (in my universe we all know Ed & Winry belong together ^^). In short, I liked your style, I liked the story, I liked it all. Congratulations, and thanks a lot for giving us something funny and well written.
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Reviewed By: Karoru Metallium On: May 24, 2004 11:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I giggled, indeed xDDD. You're very articulated, and managed to write a PWP that's not quite a PWP (in my universe we all know Ed & Winry belong together ^^). In short, I liked your style, I liked the story, I liked it all. Congratulations, and thanks a lot for giving us something funny and well written.
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2004 00:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good story XD I like what you have. Don't have really anything to say, heh...
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Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2004 11:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I just wanted to say I LOVED this fic. I just saw episode 25 of FMA and I desperately something to cheer me up. This story definitely brushed aside my low spirits!! Though I couldn't force myself to laugh even a little (probably because of episode 25), I enjoyed every word of it, especially how you managed to name those certain limbs of a man and a woman without actually writing down the word, but replacing them by "it" and "them" and so on. That was very creative and made it ever more fun to read!!! Good story!!!!!!
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