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 Title: against all odds
Reviewed By: tigressofrain  On: April 06, 2009 08:58 PDT
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absolutely amazing..i started your story yesterday and finished now at 11:55 am...(yes i did sleep but when i woke, i continued) your description of Vegeta was very on point, and loved how you made him kill frieza which is how dbz shouldve have went *glares at akira toriyama* this is one of the best a.u's i have ever read..please keep writing
 Reviewed By: .  On: January 05, 2009 07:49 PST
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im pretty sure you know how awesome this is... im not sure why you dont have more reviews on this site. quick question - theres a small discrepancy in bulma's age... in the beginning, she was taken from earth when she was 12, and was in frieza's court 15 years later, and later on, she was drinking coffee, she'd started at 9 and 15 years later she was still drinking it... hmmm... lol i'll assume she's 24 - it'll mean she has longer with vegeta - i love how yummy you've made him in this fic.
 Reviewed By: Kami_Dee [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 18, 2007 01:33 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I have to say, You've ruined ALL other DBZ Bulma/Vegeta fics (which is all I read anyway) for me. Now all fanfics are left half-read or angrily exited when I realise that none could meet the high standards that this fic has achieved ^__^ Now I seemed doomed to wait anxiously for anything remotely Bulma/Vegeta related from you. Excellent work!
 Title: Against All Odds
Reviewed By: cas0239 [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 31, 2007 12:07 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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I absolutely loved this story. I hope you plan on writing more chapters for it. The last one was a cliff hanger and i am yearning for the rest of the story...KEEP UP THE EXCELLENT W0RK!
 Title: Hail the author!
Reviewed By: theblueone [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 05, 2006 10:28 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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For the second time, this story is still some of the best Vegeta characterization I have ever read. You capture the darkness of serving under Frieza perfectly. I commend you. Bravo!
 Title: Art for you.
Reviewed By: theblueone [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 26, 2006 20:27 PDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Hey, this is the second time I've read this story. I drew a picture for it and it's posted here on MediaMiner. I thought you might give it a look and if you like it maybe tag it to your fic. The link is: http://fa.mediaminer.org/39/191839.jpg Enjoy!
 Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 22, 2006 07:33 PDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Brilliant story, you have a great style of writing, i have read some of your others, i like the bit about the rubber duckies!..anyway going to read the sequal now while i wait for the lab monkey update...
 Reviewed By: theblueone [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 06, 2006 01:46 PDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Amazing story. I couldn't stop reading it once I started. The character development in this story was perfect. All hail the gifted author!
 Reviewed By: LunaticPandora  On: September 28, 2005 19:50 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yay for good fanfics! A couple chapters made me wanna cry, but it was all good! You never made it through the worst parts seem like Veggie-chan was a wimp. Though you did make him rather insane @.@ Oh well, theres an insane lustful beast inside all of us! 
 Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 17, 2005 18:58 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love it! Perfect plot, your details are too die for, and its just so so wonderful!
 Title: Tears!
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 16, 2005 21:21 PDT
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Overall Rating: 9 of 10
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Wow wasn't expecting the last couple of chapters. Nice plot twists. The last chapter made me cry!
 Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 15, 2005 23:35 PDT
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Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
So far so good. Extensive lemons, very involved plot, and reacurring, well developed symbols. Well done.
 Reviewed By: fyrechylde [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 18, 2005 01:34 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow...on scale of 1 to 10, you are a 13. That fic has definitely become one of my all time favorites next to World Enough and Time and The Awakening Saga. You are an extremely gifted writer. I love the fact that you made Bulma dark, but you didn't break her. She was a little nutty (after all she's been through she should be) but you allowed her to be believable and strong. It put on the level with Vegita...not innocent, but there is hope for redemption. *shakes head* Wow...utter wow. When Vegita watched that last hologram while he was in the pod, I broke down into tears. *sighs* Beautifully written...now, ON TO THE SEQUEL!!! *grinz*
 Title: It was HOT
Reviewed By: amora [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 14, 2005 06:27 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
That was the Hottest B/V Fanfic I ever read to a completion. Write MOre gurl cause ur on a role.
 Title: *drools*
Reviewed By: Pisquenta [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 23, 2004 13:34 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This has got to be the best B/V fanfic I've ever read! I think that both are exactly like the anime characters (I never got any mangas). After I read this story, I could never read anything that showed Vegeta soft and Bulma weak! Thank you!!!
 Title: What a ride!
Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 13, 2004 09:07 PDT
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I have just promoted this to my short list of All-Time AUs. This was a great story and you told it in remarkable fashion. My favorite chapter was the moments of epiphany during the purge for Radditz and Vegeta. That was very well done. You captured Vegeta and Bulma's personalities perfectly and I bought every action they made--you did a great job using internal dialogue to show us their reasonings and motivation. The only negative thing about this fic is that you could use a beta, but even the urge to pull out my red pen did not detract from my overall enjoyment of this wonderful fic. Brava! *toddles off to the sequel*
 Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 24, 2004 21:50 PDT
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yey yey yey! You updated here! I've been reading At Odds on your website and love yr work! Yes, this chapter was a bit long, a bit sappy, and maybe not as gloriously efficient as the previous one--but shoot, woman, it's a B/V lemon-o-rama! How could you deny your readers this? Weeeee! What a great story. Am following your stuff with pure delight and marveling at your talent for Saiyan romance!!!
 Reviewed By: Cioheos  On: July 05, 2004 20:31 PDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This fic blew me away! WOW! I love it. You are the bestest author ever. LOVE IT!!!!
 Reviewed By: roxychica091  On: July 03, 2004 19:38 PDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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great story!! i luv it sooo much... please update!!
 Reviewed By: 1lfduyhij  On: June 18, 2004 09:05 PDT
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Holy mother of crap! this is the best fic I have ever read. You need to replace the names and get published.
 Reviewed By: GetaGirl 247 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 13, 2004 13:42 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
If I give you some lemons, will you make lemonade. Keep up the good work, and I am wating ever so patiently for the next chapter. ********************************************** Vegeta: Don't let that pathetic onna lie to you, she is pulling her hair out crying about when will the next chapter be out. GetaGirl 247: Am not!!!(looks around at various peices of wet hair lying on the ground and sighs in defeat.) Bulma: Just because you aren't getting any at home doesn't mean that you have to rush the lemon. Wait, what the hell am I talking about. Vegeta, get your ass over here and kiss me right now. Uh, Tempting Temptation can you please (Oh, Vegeta put your hand right there) hurry up with our lemon. GetaGirl 247: Wow, a lemon right in front of my eyes. Who needs a story when I have my warped little mind. Bulma and Vegeta: Shut up!!! ************************************************* Seriously, great story. Happy writing.
 Title: yey!
Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 09, 2004 13:57 PDT
Comment/Review:
Of course he chooses family over throne but it's always interesting to see how he gets there. This fic adds so many luscious details to that psychological journey, makes lots of damn sense (I liked how V was used sexually only once by F but that F chose to make him an heir instead of a concubine--that worked so well, loved that part!) and gives everyone a hell of a plot to ride! And now you've given us a little symmetry with that regen tank tease scene! The confrontation over the cold shower was perfect B/V. YEY! The B/V fanfic form is not dead--long live the B/V! debbiechan
 Reviewed By: Yari [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 07, 2004 17:52 PDT
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**sobs** That last paragraph was just so... PRETTY! I really like this story! You gotta update soon!
 Reviewed By: Geta Girl 24/7  On: June 07, 2004 17:26 PDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I am sooo glad that after all of this Vegeta tourturing that he and his blue-haired angel are back together again. Now that they are back together, when are they going to get Trunks.
 Title: freakin awesome
Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 07, 2004 09:25 PDT
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mm.org is blipping on me or else I'd written even sooner to let you know how much this chapter delighted me. So glad to have discovered you here--this fic is so well-done, with all the grandeur of the highest, bestest, most emotional B/V romance! AAh! If the DBZ story were only all Vegeta's story, then a lot of dorks like me could die happy watching that anime! LOVELY job. debbiechan
 Reviewed By: Vegge's Mate [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 07, 2004 05:50 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Excellent! Simply excellent. Your fic is too amazing for me to put in words.
 Reviewed By: twistedpyro  On: June 01, 2004 17:05 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
FINALLY!! he admits its!! this is so fuckin great!! can't wait for the next chapter
 Reviewed By: Anouk  On: May 30, 2004 10:25 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
COOOOOOOOL!!!!
 Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 17, 2004 21:38 PDT
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I can't believe I've been overlooking this fic! What a page turner, er, mouse-clicker. Compelling narrative, just enough reverence for the original anime, flowing imaginative scene changes. This one has all the best stuff an A/U should--I'm really entertained (loved it when Vegeta had to think of Nappa in a dress to keep his control). Will go now and read all your fics! debbiechan
 Reviewed By: dbz fan jess  On: May 17, 2004 20:18 PDT
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ok you've got me addicted, I can't wait for the next update
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