| "Lab Monkey" Reviews/Comments [ 442 ] |
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Title: A Twist!
Reviewed By: Evanscent [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2005 18:55 PDT
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Talk about throwing wrenches into the system. Jesus. King Kold is the King of wrenches! I hope that Vegeta is up for the challenges he has to face now... Or will this timeline continue to merge with the original story and will our antihero and his bonnie lass return to Earth? I look forward to seeing this story unfurl. Some more. Best wishes to the mommy and daddy and their little wonder. Love ya! -Evanscent/Keely
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Title: Amazed
Reviewed By: Starbrella (not signed on) On: September 26, 2005 09:45 PDT
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WOW ::speechless:: this whole thing was so amazing. God, i'm so freakin happy taht you finally updated i could almost brust into tears. This is incrediable...if you ever stop writing i would seriously hunt you down and force you to continue (ok that was a bit stalker-ish). ^_^ Great job and UPDATE SOON! because i'm soooo hooked on this!!
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Reviewed By: Amoraluv [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2005 18:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ur story is da bomb. if i had awards for my favorite stories u would totally be a first place winner
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Reviewed By: Vegetaslindalou On: September 25, 2005 10:42 PDT
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I am so glad that you updated. This is so good. Please don't keep us in supense to long, update please.
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Reviewed By: debbiechan not logged in On: September 25, 2005 08:39 PDT
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GLAD TO SEE YOU BACK IN BUSINESS, WOMAN! And as sexy and cruel as ever. This chapter rocked. I was hoping it would spur me to finish my BV but it only left me intimidated by your luxuriously dark story. Woot, this was great! And it was great to read as Hurricane Rita was bearing down on us in these parts--I had a howling wind accompaniment. Btw, you left Lisa's review in red at the end of this chapter! :-D
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Reviewed By: FuzzyToad On: September 23, 2005 20:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Although I'm not the most patient, damn! Well worth the wait. Nothing like a talented writer, I'd wait forever for a good story line, rather than quckly updated shit! Mind you, I don't necessarily WANT to wait. I love a good piece of angst and can't wait to see what horrors come next. I love the character development in Geta, so many try to show his softer side by makng him a pussy. His emotions are not only beleivable, but the basis which makes his character so complex. You are truly gifted! Update soon (as soon as quality dictates.)
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Reviewed By: pisq On: September 23, 2005 19:13 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! This was soooo good! I have no words to describe it properly!! WOW!
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Reviewed By: Mely On: September 23, 2005 18:40 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always a great chapter. You always produce the best.
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Title: amazing!
Reviewed By: blue dragon (not signed in) On: September 23, 2005 00:17 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OHHHHH I'm soooo thrilled you've updated!! This story just keeps getting better and more exciting with each chapter! Gods I hope Vegeta will get to Bulma in time! Gods the angst, the anticipation, it's killing me!!!! I'll be glued to my screen until you next update! ^__^ love, BD.
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Reviewed By: Heiress2thethrone [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2005 23:00 PDT
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WOWSERS. what a chappy. the past two chapters were way intense. kudos on the lemon scene definately one of the best ive ever read. great job. can't wait for an update
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Reviewed By: FRiEDRiCE On: September 22, 2005 21:40 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ah!! that happened to her?! something always happens to her!!! Every. Darn. Fic. well dont leave us hanging for long. that was awesome
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Reviewed By: aly1 On: September 22, 2005 21:03 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you. did. not. just. do. that...dude i cant even formulate a sentence im so frustrated. you left me hangin, man...and for that you must write another chapter!! lol...great, awesome...blah blah you already know you rock. ^_~
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2005 20:50 PDT
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Nicely done. King Cold showing up is a nice twist, but it was pretty obvious that leaving Bulma alone is not a good idea. I can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: September 22, 2005 20:39 PDT
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awesome chapter... wow... jeez the ending left me in suspense... can't wait for more... ^_^
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Title: Lab Monkey
Reviewed By: MLF (MACCAM) On: September 22, 2005 18:29 PDT
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i'm shocked, i can't believe that they are on king cold ship. poor bulma with al the shit that shes been through good grief. vegeta has her in hi sblood and with that i have a feeling things are going to change (but not sure for the better) great F*IN chapter. it's been a while i kept reading the last chapter at least five times :p glad you update, i know it's hard with a baby *HUGS*
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