| "Anything Other Than A Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ] |
| Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Arai On: October 21, 2004 00:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
There aren't enough DBZ crossovers. Especilly good ones. Plus Vegeta, Kagome, and Shippou happen two be my favorite characters. Thanks.
|
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 08:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
very very interesting...can't wait to see where you will take this cause man oh man this sounds like fun....YAY!!! can't wait to see their reactions to each other:D THANKS:D
|
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 02:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
alright w/a beginning like that...it sure got me hooked
|
Reviewed By: SilverFoxTears On: October 18, 2004 20:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh My Gods,This Is Such A Good Story. So Far, I Like The Amazing Detail: Not Too Much That It's Boring, But Enough To Satisfy. If You Can't Tell, I Love DBZ And IY Crossovers. I Really Wan't You To Update So I Can Read More Of You Interesting Work.Thankies!
|
Reviewed By: Kanna_Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 19:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
please up date soon! so i'm guessing that the hole inu ordeal never happened? then how dose she know what youkai are?
|
Reviewed By: badassreviewer On: October 16, 2004 01:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was awesome!
|
Reviewed By: i love slipknot! On: October 15, 2004 22:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh please update i've never read a story like this i want to know how vegeta and shippo are going to be taken to kagomes house
|
Reviewed By: Ryu_Maru On: October 15, 2004 21:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's great please update soon
|
Reviewed By: Sesshomaru_Daughter [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2004 19:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Me likey Me likey alot I can't wait to see wut is goin to happen next so please update soon ok!! Oh and is this a Vegeta/Kagome??
|
Reviewed By: yashamoru [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 00:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
keep writing please update
|
Reviewed By: Chey1391 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 01:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
keepon wrighting its really good so far.You might want ether longer chapters or more chapters faster 'cause this is really good and people will start wrightin flames.Even ifyou arnt a begining auothor.It might help you.SOOOO more please.
|
Reviewed By: Koaitan Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2004 13:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, seems like a good fic, so update soon okay?
|
Title: Cool!!!
Reviewed By: Black_Tsunami01 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 19:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
This sounds like it's going to be interesting! This sounds really cool! I'm not sure but I think it's sayian, not saijin...but oh well. Update soon
|
Title: ANYTHING OTHER THEN A SLAVE
Reviewed By: ONI1224 On: April 25, 2004 16:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE MORE MORE MORE! ADD MORE CHAPTERS!
|
Title: oooooooh!
Reviewed By: rosie13 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 20:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow, that was great! I liked the last line: "Well, at least most of them aren't" That was the coolest part! I like personally ending my chapters with those one-liners that sums the whole thing up. Like I said, really good, and quick put up the next chapter!!! ^-^
|
| Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] |
