| "Insert you with Kurama: Angel Kitsune" Reviews/Comments [ 60 ] |
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Reviewed By: chibi-fire-fox [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2004 19:34 CDT
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make a sequal or how ever you spell it any how i want to know what happens!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Nasi Blaze On: September 26, 2004 11:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok that had better not be the ending our you are gonna have one pissed reviewer. anyway it's coming out great and i can't wait for you to update.
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Title: my idea
Reviewed By: heather aka kasumi1205 On: September 26, 2004 01:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i got an idea for the story, they have a wedding but it gets intruppted by a demon and now kurama is extremely pissed. her kills demon, they get married and have some really cute kids. ps.im hooked on this story, plz write more
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Title: my idea
Reviewed By: heather aka kasumi1205 On: September 26, 2004 01:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i got an idea for the story, they have a wedding but it gets intruppted by a demon and now kurama is extremely pissed. her kills demon, they get married and have some really cute kids. ps.im hooked on this story, plz write more
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Title: my idea
Reviewed By: heather aka kasumi1205 On: September 26, 2004 01:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i got an idea for the story, they have a wedding but it gets intruppted by a demon and now kurama is extremely pissed. her kills demon, they get married and have some really cute kids. ps.im hooked on this story, plz write more
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Title: my idea
Reviewed By: heather aka kasumi1205 On: September 26, 2004 01:13 CDT
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i got an idea for the story, they have a wedding but it gets intruppted by a demon and now kurama is extremely pissed. her kills demon, they get married and have some really cute kids. ps.im hooked on this story, plz write more
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: Rain Kitsune On: September 25, 2004 22:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello, ummm, your fic is good, there is almost no plot to this yet but I'll try, let's see, The reader could have a evil sister that is working for the evil master mind, or the next chapter could be Kurama and the reader making plan's for there wedding, I mean, how bout a little light on the reader's past, that could work as well, just take a look at some of the other fan fic's and just think like, well what if this particular thing happened or what if this charictor was hurt, who dun it? ^_^ I like to say stuff like that, if you want to E-Mail me for hel or a new charictor to work with just E-Mail me at shintahemora101@yahoo.com
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Title: another idea i think
Reviewed By: inu-sessfan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 15:51 CDT
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now that i have been nearly killed i'm more determined 2 get stronger i have a hidden room that i didn't know i have and find it's a virtral/gravity room and i train da and night for about a week then come out about 6 times stronger and faster that i was at first.o and can my hair go 2 waist length pwease?
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Title: VERY IMPORTANT PLEASE READ!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Moon Princess On: September 05, 2004 11:20 CDT
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As people may know MM.org is deleting all CYOA's. Man that is crap!!!!!!!!!! I really don't want this fic to be deleted. I hope you have this saved and so as your other fics. You can post them up on www.freewebs.com/silvernfalcon and www.soupfiction.net All CYOA's are available there! Well I gotta go and I hope you'll see this review in time because they are deleting CYOA's soon! *sigh*
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Reviewed By: yoko_kurama_forever (not logged in) On: September 04, 2004 20:10 CDT
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I screwed up the last one sorry.You are a good writer.You should make a sequal.keep writing!
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Reviewed By: yoko_kurama_forever (not logged in) On: September 04, 2004 20:07 CDT
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Reviewed By: Kurama and Hiei's lover On: September 02, 2004 19:12 CDT
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add a sequal to the story!!!
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Reviewed By: Every Heart [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2004 16:17 CDT
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yah u should make a sequel! it's an awesome story!! very cute to!! can't wait until the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Moon Rose of Deception (not logged in) On: August 15, 2004 20:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz update and plz make a sequel i love it! thanx!
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Title: Ooo...
Reviewed By: KuramaIs4Me [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 21:25 CDT
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I really like this story. You should do a sequal!! I will definatly read it!! I liked this chapter. I got a kiss from Kurama, thats always good. Not to mention he is my FIANCE!!! Keep it coming girl!!
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