| "Flying Away" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Reviewed By: Critic On: October 23, 2002 23:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
You FUCK!!!!
Write More, OR DIE FUCKING!!!!!!!!1 |
Reviewed By: Shader On: October 07, 2002 19:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
I LOVE this though please go easy on old team rocket its not their fault their morons. Oh and i think you should make a chapter where lets just say.......... TRuNKS GOES INSANE AND BLOWS ASH UP!!!!!!! i like it but still pan and trunks should date or trunks and marron either would be okay |
Reviewed By: Red Dragon On: October 04, 2002 04:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story will you please write more soon!? And I think that Mew would be cool. |
Reviewed By: Grymalkin On: October 04, 2002 00:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its a good story if you would just keep writing!! you really should keep writing this its damn good. As for your question, Mew or Mewtwo would be good, it's something new and exciting. Just keep writing. |
Reviewed By: Gloria Stone [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2002 19:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey:) this story is awsome:)
I can't wait to read the next chapters.
I truly love this story. Its the only crossover of this nature that actually is good:)
Peace
Gloria stone |
Reviewed By: Tiffany On: September 12, 2002 23:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
On the screen it said that you updated. But there are still the same chapters posted. Did you add another chapter, because I can't find it. |
Reviewed By: chibi vegeta On: August 20, 2002 12:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great story you have going here. you should make a chapter where Ash dies. please write more chapters, and oh yeah, Ash should die. |
Reviewed By: tidus On: August 20, 2002 10:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i enjoyed reading this fic, please hurry and write more ok ! |
Reviewed By: sphinx_raider [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2002 20:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is the best poke'mon crossover I've read! *Go Pan!" I think you should get an eevee from her egg. -_-o I dunno ur adress |
Reviewed By: akira On: July 21, 2002 11:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
when are the next chapters coming up?
Cause i want plenty to read because it's damn exiting |
Reviewed By: Tiffany On: July 18, 2002 03:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i hope you update soon. I love reading your story and can't wait to see what happens to pan. Please keep up the great work. |
Reviewed By: turtel1 On: July 09, 2002 07:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
when is the next chapter coming up?
please let it be much cause i wone read
a good story |
Reviewed By: digiboy On: November 07, 2002 07:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So pan and mewto going to fight I wonder what going to happen |
Reviewed By: lala On: July 03, 2002 10:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
it would be cool if the egg wasn't really an egg, and it was something else that mews are born from. i can't see pan and ash together cause i always like pan/trunks fics. and since we don't know anything about ash's dad, and he has the features of a saiyan, make it turn out that he's half saiyan or somethin. good story so far |
Reviewed By: akira On: June 22, 2002 06:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep writing it's one of the best story's ever
here on mediaminer.
p.s.:try to make pan a pokemon champion that will
be so cool. |
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