| "The Two Nightmares" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ] |
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 18:33 CDT
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The chapter was kinda short, but funny! ^^ I would have tossed water at someone too if they woke me up at two in the morning. And then I would run like the dickens. Especially if it was Hiei. But then he's a lot faster than me so he would catch me... sorry, drifted off subject there. V. entertaining chapter anyway. I can actually visualize all that in my head... ^^
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 15:46 CDT
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Augh... a meetinga two AM? I might be one of the few people who would still be awake... What's the meeting about? Ok, update soon!
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 19:00 CDT
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btw I'm adding this to my favorites.
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 19:00 CDT
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ARGH! You make good cliffies. I am jealous. I think Raye should end up with Ajo because I am too much of a Kurama fangirl to say otherwise. Plus Ajo seems to like her and I don't wanna break the poor guy's heart. I love this fic. Please update it soon. I want to find out what happens and how they get past Bonecrusher. Hiei is so sneaky. ^^
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Title: wheee
Reviewed By: Shiny Lights [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 19:38 CDT
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I already know what happens! NOW UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 17:10 CDT
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What the hell is Ajo doing!!! grr... update soon, I want to gind out what happens!!!
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 23:31 CDT
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I probably should be checking to see if you update, shouldn't I? O_O Three cliffhangers!!! grr.. if I review, will you update real soon? Please?
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Title: RRRRRRR!!!
Reviewed By: Yumiko Yoshihanan (too lazy to sighn in) On: July 06, 2004 09:07 CDT
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You are sooo....soo...soo... EVIL!! I like that...BUT NOT WHANT YOU INCORPERATE IT ON YOUR FANFIC!!! AND IN # PLACES!!!
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Title: Ahh!!
Reviewed By: Yumiko Yoshihana [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 12:14 CDT
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I don't want to have to do a pointlees book report, so I am reveiwing. Keep up the good work. There, I did it!
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Title: Coolio!
Reviewed By: Yumiko Yoshihana [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 12:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it much so! Soo glad you updated so soon! I wasn't expecting it!! I'm lovin the story, BTW. Charactors are mostly in character, witch is always brownie points. I wouldsudgest you giving ray and ajo some weaknesses and limitations. Also, I would add more discription and drag out the plot a bit... but thats me. Keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 15:56 CDT
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yay, cookies and plushies! What's Haya up to? Is she going to betray Lazu? hmm... I like the way this fic is going. Looking forward to your next update!^-^
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 00:16 CDT
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Hey, this is D&G rating your fic! *waves* Umm, don't take this the wrong way or anything, but Raye and Ajo seem kinda Mary-Sueish. It's just that they seem way too good. They don't seem to have any weaknesses. Just my opinion. Besides that, this sounds like a great fic! ^-^ I really like the way the plot is going. I think Ajo/Raye is a good pairing. Well, Ja! ^-^
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Title: Great Story
Reviewed By: Yumiko Yoshihana [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 07:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really great story...well writen and a really great plot. I think it should be a Raye/Ajo pairing...if one at all. I don't really think it needs andy pairings. It's great as is, but if you must, deffinatly Ajo/Raye
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Reviewed By: raithetigerspirt On: May 16, 2004 20:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think raye and yoko should get together
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Reviewed By: isis4422 On: May 15, 2004 17:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey this is a great fic plz continue it cause i can't wait to read more
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