| "New York New York" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: Amostar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2002 12:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really great story so far!! I'm only 13 so I can't write so good. But I can spell. I think you should work on your spelling. It would make the story easier to understand. I still love it thought. I mean if you read my stories>>Flowers of Sakura's Garden ,Cherry Blossoms and Crisis of the Unknown. You'd probley say they sucked. You have a good talent puting swear words in there though....lol.
Keep up the good...er....GREAT wotk!!!
Amostar |
Reviewed By: Ryoko On: January 25, 2002 19:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Totaly cool. You should continue fanfic.
what will happen next? |
Reviewed By: Rachel* [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2002 05:44 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally the cahpter we've all been wanting to come out! WHAHAHAHAHAHA! (Next week...) Subchapter - Whatever happened to Kasadey? - |
Reviewed By: Sparkles On: January 24, 2002 19:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What happens next??????????? Please continue!!!! |
Reviewed By: ~*LoveBug*~ On: January 07, 2002 20:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There is only one way to descibe youre fanfic....... It's sugio=cool!!!!!!! You must
continue this fanfic... what will happen next?
keep up the good work Rachel....Hope you finish
this fanfic soon. |
Reviewed By: cherryblossom336 On: January 06, 2002 14:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good, but you need to work on your spelling more. I really liked your fic, so keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: ~*LoveBug*~ On: January 06, 2002 12:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue!! Must have more!!!!!!!!
ME LIKE ME LIKE!!!!!!!! Hope you finish this
story what happens next??????????? |
Reviewed By: Kero-chan On: January 06, 2002 10:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue.. I just got done reading you new chapter and I loved it. WRITE MORE...
WHAT HAPPENS NEXT???? |
Reviewed By: cool On: January 06, 2002 09:17 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pls.continue |
Reviewed By: *~CherryBlossom~* On: January 05, 2002 20:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THis is sooooooooo Kawaii!!= cute!!!!!
Please ohhhh please finish this fanfic.
I must know if Li gets sakura or if Ethan
or Byan. Ohh this is so confusing.
I must know what happens next.
Soooo Please PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: ~*Spinner~* On: January 05, 2002 20:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ME LIKE! ME LIKE! PLEASE CONTINUE THIS
FANFIC! WHAT WILL BRYAN do too get Sakura.
Will Li tell Sakura his true feellings befor
Bryan gets her?
P.S. Continue A.S.A.P. |
Reviewed By: CCS On: August 30, 2001 09:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love this story! Please write chapter 2 ASAP! I want to find out what happens!! PLEASE?! PLEASE PLEASE?!!!!!!! ^-^ |
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